Black Poetry : Heart of a Sonnet....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Upon the stars our shadows roam
    engaging in flyte cross the sky
    as my being dance with yours
    the search of reaching within the rapture
    where our hearts rest in a cascading
    cloud covering, molding souls and interlace
    in a vow, touched within...yet untouched
    brings forth desires of love's core
    which....unfolds and bonds into one

    (c) 2005
    Poetry by an Angel
    Vision Paradise
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Love it tis. :D

    Well said...:wink:

    :thanks: for sharing your view of love with the family.

    :toast:
     
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    under the blissful moon
    every sparkle glist on waves
    as flyte is taken upon the
    rapture of love that covers
    in essence and comfort
    bodies take as one beating
    two hearts of bond

    Tyte drop lovin the flava on dis one flow on !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes indeed i do think..thanks for the love Money!!!!
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Thats beautiful Sis! I loved it as well!

    beautiful drop!
     
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    MrFolklore Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My thoughts are scattered in this piece as you say "a poetic ride" indeed this was smooth!!!

    Roam far into the heavens, in depth our souls mold. Assembles two into one divine untouched yet touched. My love shows through, take my hand and lets make this last. Captured in a dream of beauty...addicted... my soul is. Take my hand.



    MrFolk
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Purple I happy you enjoyed my scribe sis
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Angel...this flows like a calm river on a hot summer day...lovely piece queen. keep scribing.

    your brother blak
     
  9. PositiveMindset

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    I quote bro. blak, "this flows like a calm river on a hot summer day".

    Do your thing, cuz U do it so wonderfully.

    Nice piece.
     
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    within the waves the air
    takes hold as loves core
    covers the comfort and bring
    us together in heavens light
    two into one....hearts desires
    glistening in the wind

    thanks for the love and sonnet
    Angel
     
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