Black Poetry : Heart made of stone.......Lover's plea

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heart made of stone
    Heart made of stone
    Heart made of stone

    Two lover's wanting a life of a house, kids
    You know the American dream
    With the world being the way it is it seems dreams are made for
    SUCKERS
    You hate when my mouth puckers
    Because I want more than the eye can see
    My heart red, bloody, filled with strong veins
    Then their is you a man whose heart is made of
    STONE
    How could you ever love if it doesn't beat?
    How could you ever have feeling if you can't feel?
    Tell me how could stone do anything else
    I'm inquiring how could a heart of stone ask this delicate bird for to be as
    ONE
    Your wife
    You took my breathe away when I first saw you
    I was so captivated by your beauty
    You don't have to be a woman to have beauty
    For you as my man you had it within
    Instant connection
    Spiritual
    Your willingness to cater to me
    Was it all a lie
    A trap to get what you really wanted
    This past year has been ups and down
    Ups and down
    Tell me how long must we carry on this way?
    When we are passionate
    The love that come forth from our lips
    As we both bask in the animalistic love we both desire
    Tearing at one's flesh as you thrust into me
    And the evidence of my teething, sucking of your skin
    As we both go at each other hunter to prey
    HUNTER TO PREY
    Ravishing my flesh, my walls
    as you try to beat the words of
    WOMAN I LOVE YOU STOP WANTING MORE THAN I CAN GIVE
    Thrusting, the look of needing is apparent in your eyes
    As you stare at me
    You just want me to love you for you, and only you
    But what can you do
    When the woman of your life seems to not let the one's hurt/shame of before go
    GO, GO, GO, GO
    Somebody call paramedic my man is dying
    I see the chisel
    I see a lying man beside me
    I look down at his chest
    and see a tiny blood vessel
    He loves me
    He loves me
    Before he turns completely to stone
    I must chip away the hardening of his
    BEAUTIFUL
    WARM
    HEART
    I must let the flow of the blood fill its veins once again
    once again
    For I can't let this love die
    Our love die
    His love die
    Die
    Die
    Die
    I must chisel away before his
    Heart turns to stone..............



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  2. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This kind of has slight parallel to that fairytale bout the princess kissing the frog to turn him into a prince. Except yours is like the woman giviing a stone a blood transfusion so it can turn back into a man. I like that similarity and yeah it rocks!
     
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    He's gonna have to want that heart to keep pumping blood too, if he allows himself to really listen, he can be swayed. I felt this expression poetess.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    very passionate

    it's so hard when people don't meet you half-way

    at least


    you know
     
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    deep yet real and felt deeply love how u broke it down
     
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