Black Poetry : Heart ****... (Love Stinks)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Reason, Jul 3, 2001.

  1. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!

    Reason, This was a 3some....deep, funny and real....
    Lets hope her not wiping will cause her to stink enuff so she won't be able to get close enuff to **** on anyone else. :D
    I'm just trying to lighten the mood:heart:

    I truly loved this...deep, deep, deep

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco...

    Babygirl, I thought I would be a little creative on this peice, while it's not all my emotion I thought I would add humor to it and try to make it so others can relate to it. it's from the heart...lol

    Thanks for da love
    Reas
     
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    DAYUM!!

    you musta got done in!
    this piece was great
    and i love the whole portrayal
    love your way of thinking...
    reminds me of my own.
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wild mami...

    you killin me here... done in?!? you got me crackin up...lol it aint all bad... im goin through some stress right now. thank you for da love dear...

    ~laughin
    Reas
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is an awesome piece. Write the words Poet...write the words.

    BE
     
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    Interesting

    use of body parts and function. Love though, is a two way street, and I firmly believe that nothing can happen in a relationship that either party didn't see coming. IMO.

    JAH Love.
     
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    **** Reas

    **** why she go out like that

    all the more REASON you the man

    there are more fish in the sea as they say

    Peace
     
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    aaahhhh....

    that's putting it all out there. loved the flow of it...the nonstop portrayal of anger/disappointment in it. Str8. LOVE DON'T STINK, REAS...you just had a bad .........

    YeshuJah...yes, love is a two way street...but, unless you're both being str8 with each other--and both are into the relationship and their partner--things can sometimes sneak up on you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL

    U KNOW WE HAVE SOME GOOD ONE'S
    AND SOME BAD ONE'S
    SHE JUST WAS A BULLSHYTER!!
    CLASS ACT #2 BUT U SAW IT THROUGH
    REAL LOVE AWAITS U IN THE EAST
    WESTSIDE STORY IS CLOSE COZ IT STINKS!!
    LOL:lol: :lol: :lol: :toast: :D :heart:
    SHOWING SOME HEART!
    I FEEL YA MAN!!
     
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