Black Poetry : heart and soul

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  1. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to my heart and soul i offer this piece


    (to steven jr.)
    as i watched your head pop out on easter sunday
    my heart became u cuz i knew that one day
    u would become all that u are
    my shining black prince
    my shining black star

    as i watch over u i see so much of me
    sometimes i worry cuz i want u to be
    a better man than i could ever be
    in my mind there is no doubt
    of the luv in your heart
    and what u will be about

    a loving heart is all that i see
    when i look at u and imagine what will be


    (to devin)
    after watching your birth a lil man i came to hold
    i know now that in my arms i held my soul
    a spirit so free a will so strong
    in u i see the peace that my soul has longed

    fearless yet caring is what i see
    when i look at u hoping that came from me
    thru u my spirit and soul have become whole
    being your dad and teaching u luv is my lifes goal

    with each bear hug and sloppy kiss
    i need u to listen and remember this
    you are all that embodies my soul
    my hopes and dreams are you two
    and they shall never grow old

    to my heart and soul
    the luvs of my life
    u give me strength
    with a future thats so bright
    :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi cypher, :wave:

    This is a beautiful testament of a father's love for his sons. I am wiping tears!! I imagine you are a wonderful dad to write something so glowingly touching. I can tell it came from the deepest place in your heart. All my love to you and yours!!

    Sierra~ :toast:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man, I'm lovin' this write!!
    Do tha thang, Poet!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed it is
    Abeautiful thing to
    Wach the poetic words floow
    from a father's pen..about
    his offspring!!!
    this is so beautiful...you don't see many men praising their
    children as you do yours :) :wave: :thanks: for sharing this b/c it's all that n more!!!!!!!!
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW~

    what can i possibly say....? If I were given a choice of one word, I would say..........




    OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    EXCEPTIONAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    TERRIFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I know I said one word, but I meant one word at a time! Good one homie!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! scribe
    beautiful vibing
    da love in motion
    dis here was off the hook !
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    back in time...

    awesome flow...enjoyed the read this is so beautiful

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so endearing...wow, such a deep expression of a father's love.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow felt the love for this on:kiss:
     
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    a supa blast from da past...
    nice poem brotha...i hope all is well

    one love
    khasm
     
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