Quiet Poetry Lounge : HEART 2 HEART

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Feb 10, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Heart 2 heart
    friend 2 friend
    soul 2 soul
    forever we hold
    in warm embrace
    as we journey
    many miles we face

    as my heart calls out
    ya heart recieve
    beating together
    wit gentle breeze
    pleasin mentally
    rapid tune
    musical maze
    up in my room

    heart 2 heart
    friend 2 friend
    whispering in da wind
    tappin again & again
    my love splash
    from my heart
    seeking a taker
    a sweet caresser
    offering comfort

    heart of love
    a body of joy
    deep down to da core
    as i inhale and exhale
    dewelling within me
    i picture ya face
    tyme & tyme again
    now i know ya my
    dearest of friend
    with great love
    of
    affectionate
    compassionate
    Heart..................... :heart: :luvu: :heart:
     
  2. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very sweet piece. I enjoyed it. It has a very strong tone and voice leeting someone know how much you love them. Im lovin it. :heart: :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet i took all this in very nice this placed a smile on my face very nice should be a card...Angel
     
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    robryant1106 Active Member MEMBER

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    As I was reading this, I was skipping through the flowers going "La la la la la".
    Very sweet piece. Likes it alot!! :heart:
     
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    To know that someone is truly your friend, is such a blessing. Definitely something to be cherished. Such a richness to this vibe here.
     
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    This poem was enjoyable...loved the rhyme scheme. It's nice to have a friend that you know you can count on regardless. It makes it easier to love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz my sista Eisha much luv back

    thankz Angel happy it gave u a smile and warm feeling of great tender
    friendship

    thankz robryant for the love nice you was able to sing off this one

    thankz watz for the love sista indeed friendship is hard to have & hold
    but real true friends are forever

    thankz prizefighter happy u like and enjoyed the release of this friendship

    thank u all for the loving support y'all gave here family
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Genuine

    Richie Rich, is the real deal!

    :gossip:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz 1poet as i mix hearts & souls into one wholesome love
     
  10. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very beautiful. I felt like I was right there with you, "As my heart calls out ya heart recieve beating together wit gentle breeze pleasin mentally rapid tune musical maze up in my room" it took you on a journey and never left you stranded....I like it... :welldone:



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