Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jan 7, 2002.
Heart 2 heart
I know i was wrong
torn between me and u
$$RICH$$, $$RICH$$, $$RICH$$
Can I help you out brotha..... you my brotha...right?!? Well, if no one else will show you love, I will. Imma show you what you're doing wrong in the haiku cateogory... just like Blak showed me (once upon a while ago)
In order to be considered an actual "haiku" the poem must stick to this formula
The first line must have 5 syllables
The second line must have 7 syllables
The third line must have 5 syllables
Like this Boo ~
This is real basic.... you should get the hang of it ... even if you have to count out the syllables on your fingers as you repeat the words in each line to make sure you follow the haiku formula.
I once had your heart
I did you totally wrong
I'm now all alone
Just showin' you brotha....
No disrespect intended!
should be 17 deep on a 575 base
that's why ya my gurl !
got it now !
the glory of family...being "hipped" on some things...N2 got ya back...5-7-5...you in the money now bro...the vibe is felt blak man.
ALL GOOD VERB
N2 GOT MY BUTT ON TRACK
SO TODAY I WILL ATTACK WIT A SCRIBE
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