Black Poetry : HEART 2 HEART ((Haiku))

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Heart 2 heart
    I know i was wrong
    torn between me and u
     
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    $$RICH$$, $$RICH$$, $$RICH$$

    Can I help you out brotha..... you my brotha...right?!? Well, if no one else will show you love, I will. Imma show you what you're doing wrong in the haiku cateogory... just like Blak showed me (once upon a while ago)

    In order to be considered an actual "haiku" the poem must stick to this formula

    The first line must have 5 syllables
    The second line must have 7 syllables
    The third line must have 5 syllables


    Like this Boo ~

    This is real basic.... you should get the hang of it ... even if you have to count out the syllables on your fingers as you repeat the words in each line to make sure you follow the haiku formula.


    I once had your heart
    I did you totally wrong
    I'm now all alone



    Just showin' you :heart: brotha.... :D
    No disrespect intended!

    N2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmm!!!

    should be 17 deep on a 575 base
    that's why ya my gurl !:D

    got it now !
     
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    the glory of family...being "hipped" on some things...N2 got ya back...5-7-5...you in the money now bro...the vibe is felt blak man.


    blak
     
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    ALL GOOD VERB

    N2 GOT MY BUTT ON TRACK
    SO TODAY I WILL ATTACK WIT A SCRIBE :toast:
     
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