Black Poetry : hear me out*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Feb 24, 2002.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (off the dome)

    i'm done.

    with looking at yesterday as bricks--

    trying to build tomorrow--

    ...cuz i'm wasting my time.

    Eye...

    can't really move forward because--

    i've gotten older and--

    my knees shake a little every time i--

    stride on pavement but--

    i wouldn't change my old wise--

    maturity gained through--

    tests and lessons----



    i wouldn't trade it for reconstructive surgery.



    my boi quest once exclaimed that the ground is 2 thick--

    and

    ****...

    it is--

    and the world is trife--

    and

    i never expect anyone to read and feel like sean got issues cuz--

    maybe i don't have them--

    after i had released them--

    like cyberspacial exhalations--

    entering your internet--

    or ethernet if i might...

    correct me if i am right...

    i sit dejected--

    because i can't pull people outside the "box"

    i can't save people i love from--

    **** that harms them because it feels-

    good

    and they know that

    they momma told them

    what feels good to them

    ain't always good for them

    yet...**** stay happening--

    i move--on.

    got no--choice.

    BEWILDERED BY **** THAT--

    SITS BETWIXT REAL LIFE

    AND THE RETINA--

    reflecting bad times and

    hard luck when people say luck don't exist--

    and people staying grounded that already refused to fly--

    getting hit by cars--

    cuz if it's your time---

    it's your time--

    consider the vowels my gun--

    and the reprecussion from bussin truth--

    because a lotta y'all can't see the world past your own nose--

    with 20/20 vision.

    i'm done.

    with looking at yesterday as bricks--

    trying to build tomorrow...

    because tomorrow will stand with or without--

    my scrawny ***...

    and i just wanted y'all to hear me out.



    sean.
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear ya brotha Sean!!!

    I like your off the top flowin'!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. quest

    quest Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the reply GQ. you and the read are much appreciated.

    sean.

    evildreem
     
  4. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i definitely hear you

    :cool:

    nfinite b/c of time
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read

    thanx j'hiah for the read.

    muchappreciationliesinthissoulamine.

    sean
     
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