Quiet Poetry Lounge : healing phallus (inspired by nevar)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sha'iyn, Apr 14, 2008.

  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, screaming mind and whining vagina
    Bruised and abused uterus take time to unwind

    Your tubes aren't tied yet, your heart is in knots
    teardrops, blood clots and what-not's they all fall down
    pain echoes from your womb like groaning from a tomb
    and my ears can't escape the sound

    you feel you have depreciated in value
    because the value of man is of no value
    if he all he does is down you

    I was raised to crown you
    put love around you and wait for round two

    I was made to mount you
    not frown when you're around and clown you

    You let him do it once, twice, three times a lady
    do what makes you happy
    not what makes you crazy

    Love does'nt make you lazy it energizes the bunny
    Sugar got a long way to catch your sweet honey

    It was sunny when we met I almost broke a sweat
    and we haven't even spoken yet

    After name and number in the heat of the summer
    I don't look at you like game and i'm not a hunter

    i'm a doctor of sorts here to massage with a message
    with no pills you can heal ones' self anyway he left it
    Abstain not selibate because when I inject
    erect... I bet.. him, you will forget

    you say.. nevar, too much pain
    I say.. someday
    How do I love thee, in more than one way

    Holy as in matrimony
    Wholly as in totally
    right then she told me, "Hold me, just hold me"

    So, I held
    he failed, I succeeded and prevailed
    Now my back.. is where.. she files her nails

    We move like water after patience has built
    Controlling every stroke near the yoke, won't slip
    I stroke, I dip, I rub, won't rip
    i've got a PHD in this
    practicing hard dips

    kissing your glossed lips
    and gripping those full hips
    my phallus is equipped with the anti-venom
    you've been bit

    The remedy is in me
    My anecdote won't miss
    I'll heal you in 20 minutes
    and there's no waiting list
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me first say that your word play is a force to be reckoned with. This was lively, sensual, and endearing all at once. Flow on...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u hit a gold mind that was full of depth and display
     
  4. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    humbled...

    is how i feel.

    BE PROUD OF WHO YOU ARE. BECAUSE I AM PROUD OF WHO I AM.
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    first let me say i am deeply impressed with this piece of work.......mind blowing is what you gave me.........thanks for the love ba........... whew!:em0100:
     
  6. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sha'iyn:
    You are such a beast.
    This joint is all that.


    Much Luv
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STRONG reply my brother! Now that's how you bring it back.
     
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