Black Poetry : Heading Home

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Aug 12, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My nets full
    The sea has been good
    Your face a vision at the shore
    Guiding me away from the sunset
    I am heading home

    Closer to you
    The waters turn rough
    A storm my final hurdle
    Testing my nerve
    Wind and rain
    But my ship is strong
    Her Captain determined
    Inspired by you

    I will get through this merciless storm
    I am heading home
    Be there baby
    Keep your oven warm

    BE
     
  2. ladyx

    ladyx Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    three endless

    nights,
    and four lonely days
    her eyes ever lifted
    whenever she prays
    and in the stillness
    she awaits a word
    his voice, his promise
    is all she's heard
    this day is dying
    in the west
    she cherishes the
    things that he
    loves best
    she's oiled and
    readied the frying
    pan
    and keeps a watch
    for her fisher man...


    Hey, Heartbeat ~ I saw this thing, from both sides. And the way the story goes, I'm sho there's gonna be nothin but sweet warm lovin cookin in that oven. Thank you for the inspiration, brother!

    X
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    interesting duet forming here...:)

    as the x woman says, BE...there's love waiting at the shore. do whatcha gotta to get there. i know the storm can be murderous at times but we haveta toe the line...standing strong against the obstacles that try to bar our way to that one precious ONE who stands waiting...looking...praying for a safe return.

    let the river flow.
     
  4. Maggie

    Maggie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You can't

    possibly lose with the hook and bait you use, BE! :wink:
    She'll be waiting...she is waiting!

    LOVE THIS, BRUH MAN!!!

    Maggie
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This has such good imagery

    ...and everybody cain't be wrong! :)

    Love it!

    a
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice BE!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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