Quiet Poetry Lounge : Head Trip

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by toylin, Aug 7, 2004.

  1. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for a moment there
    just a fleeting moment
    I held you in my arms
    and I swear
    I heard you whisper
    my name
    while you played in my hair
    opening my eyes
    looking around
    there was no one
    and nothing there
    started to wonder
    how could you run away
    so fast
    not realizing
    that my emotions
    were being misled
    just my imagination
    messing with my head

    need to express my pain
    dancing in the sun
    wishing for the rain
    they say that you never
    miss the water 'til
    the well runs dry
    then my thirst must be
    in vain
    simply because
    I'm missing
    what was never there

    I saw a stranger
    wearing your face
    my situation is turning
    to desperation
    sitting here tonight
    in my cold and lonely bed
    just my imagination
    messing with my head
     
  2. MrBlak

    MrBlak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoah....that was a nice drop. I know about head tripping being too single for too long will do that, especially if you almost get a relationship going but not quite.

    (yes Toylin......I'm "happy now", LOL)
     
  3. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL. You're welcome, Mr. Blak.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice drop easy read...
    flow on and release i can feel the emotions from this
    thanks for sharing..Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awe see i know this all to well been there and seen dat !
    sometime even get lost in the moment thinking it's on and it's not
    word up i feel ya
     
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    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REPLY TO TOYLIN

    Toylin, Fantasies can indeed seem animated and authentic
    Though we be sane, some responses seem schizophrenic
    I thank the artist Toylin for painting this Masterpiece
    Because I could wrap myself in it daily and call it fleece


    Great poem you have made
    Now go and seize a great day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread
    In "GET YOUR FLOW ON" entitled:
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remembering what was can tease the mind, I know. Flow and release it, but know a better day will come in time. Emotively written and felt.
     
  8. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks brothers and sister for your support. Sometimes I get into these moods. I have 8 or 9 journals full of poetry. Glad you all liked it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed and most welcome sistah Queen
     
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    Oh yeah, I feel this. Nice and clean, good drop, sister.
     
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