Black Poetry : head to toe

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 6, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there are things you do
    early every midnight
    that belong
    to us

    no one is the wiser
    until daylight,
    when I sashay
    in a new way
    with the rhythm
    you give my hips
    in the night

    only you can hear
    my silent cries for you
    in noontime heat
    ~ & you be
    smilin in your
    knowing,

    the need
    (where you live inside)
    is
    ~growing~…

    early every moonshine
    there are whispers
    we promise
    and promises
    we whisper

    & keep

    before
    during
    after
    sated sleep

    *********
    I love you, man
    of my eastern
    dawn
    & how you
    cum so
    brilliantly
    in my
    western
    sun…

    set

    it

    ~off~

    you know
    how we do
    early every midnight
    each and every daylight

    you know
    for true

    all this
    ~~ALL THIS~~
    belongs
    to
    you!

    :heart:

    Alyce, 2001
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!

    I like this one alyce. Liked the part where you said "only you can hear my silent cries" and "early every moonshine there are whispers we promise and promises we whisper" I like the rythym of your flow. Very nice poetry. I like the layout and design. I felt this. Very excellent work. YOu are very talent. Put me in the mood for love. Exciting and new. Scribe on ma sista scribe on! Keep reppin. Comin strong.

    Desert Storm

    Sistah Pride.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce~

    Girl - this be the joynt!
    Definitely feelin' this one
    it's tyght like that...
    Ya' heard me!

    Do your thang poetess!!
     
  4. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    felt it

    Alyce...I definitely felt that poem. I was feeling your flow, and your love comes across pure and real to me.
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MS A...

    WOW!!

    ...sis... what more can i say?
    this is just You... loving in all
    your multi-faceted tendencies...

    love on beautiful Queen... love on...

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. saleem

    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah

    you wear love like a fitted leather body glove. And it shows from your crown to those toes. Yessuh, I know! :D


    saleem
     
  7. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what I wanna know...

    what it is you DO, exactly...early every midnight? hehehe

    could ya break it down for a brutha some time? Head to toe?

    Tight scribe Sis. A

    mojo
     
  8. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm definitely vibin to yo scribin
    ~Missed reading you~
    Jyntl
     
  9. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    I heard that!!! Lucky guy!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  10. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce...

    From head to toe as always you re-define...

    *FLOW*

    Hunter
     
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