Black Poetry : He

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He takes me to zones unknown
    As he spins his silk
    Around my eardrum,
    Thru the telephone.

    Dream waters float me
    Toward his horizions.
    His words set on my heart
    As they rise thru my veins.

    He is the capital letter
    At the beginning of my sentence.
    The period at the end of my consonant...
    But...my eyes are yet to see him.
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista Joyce!


    you betta git outta my head!! :D

    serious-ly... i was diggin' this piece
    with 2 shovels! :) i loved this part
    the best...
    thank you for sharing!!

    :heart:
    elayne.
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you "dug" me sis...you know the feeling is very mutual also. :)
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey I surely have been there before...thanks for that recollection :)
     
  5. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, a certain voice has a way of lingering in one's mind long after the person is gone...sumthin' ain it. :)
     
  6. Poetess

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    Good Stufffffff Joyce
     
  7. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Poetess...

    Welcome to the forum :wave:
     
  8. Rashad

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    But He sees you...

    And that's the important part...Tyte Scribe my Spirit filled Sista!:heart:
     
  9. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad,

    I see you took note of the spiritual angle. Sharp...very sharp.:)
    Thanks for the read.