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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by StarGoddess, Jun 22, 2001.

  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    barrelled into her existance
    and laid her best laid plans
    by the wayside
    and purified them in his putrified tidal wave
    of affection, submission, and attention--
    so submerged was she that

    he

    took over totally and she lost herself
    inside of him,
    and found herself again
    bathed in a new form
    far more beautiful
    than she ever imagined that she could be...

    he...

    painted her that way perfectly
    slathering her with slippery slurs of admiration
    and tender touches that frazzled her calm reserve
    to leave her skaken to the core just from mere thoughts that

    he

    might someday go away
    or diassappear back into the horizon
    he had manifested from.

    he

    came along and quietly
    reversed all her aversions
    for snuggly words
    and lilty caresses
    and butterscotch kisses
    that barely breached her lips
    but fully penetrated her soul.

    he

    made life seem like an impossibility without him near her
    with her
    around her
    inside of her
    in some way unknown and unseen
    sliding down in between
    the dark crevices in the hidden recesses
    of her tourtured heart-
    killing her slow whenever they were apart-
    a love saga borne with no end or any start.

    he

    abounded into her life and made her vulnerable,
    made her love him...
    and she's been paying for it ever since...
    ever since she fell under the deadly spell of


    he.

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  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wowww, now this is oh so tyght...yes, indeed. yet, somewhat disturbin' because i can relate.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOOOWEEEE!!

    YA GOT YA FLOW ON!
    I FEEL YA WITHIN ON DES PIECE