Black Poetry : he who visits me nightly

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He visits me Nightly

    He visits me nightly,
    Makes my heart scream,
    Soul cry for help,
    I know you think this sounds explicit,
    But I need you to listen,
    Cause these memories,
    Keep twisting,
    My mind I’ve been missing,
    Visioning us kissing,
    My lips have been missing,
    My soul has been needing,
    Its daily “feeding”
    My hair is dirty,
    Because every since,
    He left my sight,
    I’ve vowed never to wash it,
    Until you returned whats right,
    Memories,
    Of the he’s that have spoiled me rotten,
    Only to leave me pouting and forgotten,
    Tears still run until my eyes are dry,
    When memories of he,
    Who visits me nightly.
    My hair is unsightly,
    My hearts still in pieces,
    Because it is he,
    Who kept me all together.
    Erase memories of the past,
    With Absolute,
    Hate for your @zz!
     
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    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u kno i gotta say it

    u was doin ya thang on this one
    feelin' it, really really feelin' it


    :climb:to tha top
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    missing and love so that one be hated is twisted love
    flow head on sista i felt you here
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    poetic...do you know the song "im gonna wash thatman right oout of my hair"....after reading your drop i kept saying...now she should be singing that song...loud and bright...drop is tyte...now clean on up ..wash him out...and move on with your life....
     
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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "i'll make love to u,like u want me to"...Boyz II Men
    When reading ur poem i guess that u r someone for whom love means everything.The right guy is knocking at the door of ur heart sis,forget the past,close ur eyes and make one step forward
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's that hating and loving at the same time, that gets us everytime. It would be so much simplier if we could just hate, but the memories won't let us. I feel what you're saying poet, and have been there before.
     
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    I know that feeling all to often. Especially that last line. I like how you broke it down, feeling incomplete without him and the memories!!!! (ok I'm starting to have flashbacks of my own sh---t and gettin mad!) LOL!! Get u some shampoo sista, it's all good!
     
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    :lift: :lift: :lift: :lift: :lift: WOW sis, this was a power piece to me.............. Nice drop
     
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    This was a TIGHT drop poet...... :golf: Hole In one Quality!
     
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    Very nicely poetically manifested sis...................
     
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