Black Poetry : He Went To The Club

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He Went To The Club

    This one thug went to the club to confront girls boldly
    With a stunt solely to get the sweet in bed and and holy
    Whirl and twirl her world then wet the sheet and spread
    He design and model plans drink wine from bottles and cans
    Sometime startle female fans give in when his punchlines lands
    Wanted a chance to adore her on the dance floor so the romance
    Can pour galore through touch as he clutch her and try advance
    The affair and prance in thin air make her body hot as the sweat rain
    From the bloodstream to the brain and into the vein
    The game scum from this thug mean and lame wanted this dame
    With the rap he must adapt, perhaps in different situation
    And say words that will cause a magnificent stimulation
    In the body of a lady if she’s hottie maybe her kisses are frying
    She’s wearing a mini-skirt not to mention he was trying
    To divert her attention from what he really wanted by lying
    About stuff his clout was ruff its clear and plain he was here
    For poontang his rap was tight but got slapped tonight by a female
    So he failed on his attempt to pimp her so for this wimp a dusty trail
    Her emotions set free like an ocean of wet debris they float around
    The club

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
    dis was off da hook in da club dusty
    a MADD productional blaze
    dis was phat my brutha
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so he went to the club
    with a cool rap
    yet his motive
    got him slapped
    and she got loud
    until he step back
    chilling and feeling
    this flow MADDRAPP
    real life drama
    very nice
    Peace
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ha ha ha h ...serves him right tyte flow:)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow....lol thats what he get...
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is mad cool, MADRAPPER!
     
  7. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY YALL THANKS FOR FEELING AND PEEPING THIS ONE FOR REAL TOOK A WHILE TO COME UP WITH THIS ONE BUT IT CAME
     
  8. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love for this...very tight
     
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    tyte!
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yooooooooo this is madd tyte! U are the maddrapper for real! tyte just tyte!
     
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