Black Poetry : He Was There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by screamer, Dec 29, 2004.

  1. screamer

    screamer New Member MEMBER

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    :You wonder why society had power over me you gave them the authority to raise me. Society has made me the man that I am, see God punishes me but at the same time he praised me. When you gave up and did not know how to love me. God stepped in and began to mold me, you could not make me into the man that you needed me to be instead I did what I thought was right for me. See money, power and love all these things came from above. Society could not make me as long as the street did not raise me. See mom you did the best you could with the thought of no man to help you, you did the best you could with no man to chastise me. But as you can see it did take a man's help to raise me that's when God stepped in to make and mold in to the man that I am suppose to be. Reality is you did not fail me and all along you had a man to raise me. The man upstairs was my real father and he did his best at raising me
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to the house of Destee!! Enjoyed your flow and hope to see more from you. :)
     
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    welcome to destee poet...
    feel free to shine day or night...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    NNQueen going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Wow screamer...this was really a beautiful piece of art! I'm looking forward to reading more from you! Welcome to Destee's and keep on keeping it real for us!

    Queenie :spinstar:
     
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    welcome to destee.com
    nice drop and i enjoyed reading it
    visit us in voice chat as well
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    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. queentswana

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    And the goodness will show through the work that you do, this was a wonderful drop
    Welcome home, it's good to have you with us. Feel free to scream...anytime
     
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    Wow, this is quite a testament to God's glory. Great write. Welcome to Destees, looking forward to reading more.
     
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    Welcome to Destee

    I really enjoyed this read, God does in some way mold us, despite our surroundings, if we allow him to.

    keep the flow goin...

    SCW
     
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    tyte drop right here love the flow
    welcome to the house poeticly