Black Poetry : He was.....mindblowin

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  1. SistaMoon

    SistaMoon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I met this guy the other day
    Strong, black tall handsome brotha
    He was beautiful to say the least
    He took my hand in his hand , we shook and made peace
    He was absolutely mindblowin
    I almost had to pinch myself to make sure i wasnt dreamin
    He was unreal , almost angelic and sublime
    I was in the presense of real man,
    A brotha worthy of my time.
    This brotha was priceless like the Nile River
    His debonair ways, stirred my soul and made my body quiver
    I must admit I became infactuated wit every inch of him
    But he remained so calm cool collect with steady rhthymn
    I was attentive as he showered my ears with words of enlightenment and hidden intellect.
    He gazed into my eyes
    And my eyes gazed back,
    He was mystifying me , setting me up to fall deeply for his lovetrap.
    My heart fluttered with butterflies, I was in complete awe
    I felt weak in the knees, and I began to feel flushed with fever.....with a celsius of 98 degrees
    I was about to bust
    There was no stoppin this fly brotha from layin down his game
    If only I could fight this, win my heart back and leave him being unchanged.
    This was not possible, I was already his victim
    My mind was blown away.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SistaMoon

    First off ma I So dig the name... Secondly what you've done hea is mindblowing! I could see it, feel it... alla dat!

    Reas
     
  3. shaz

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    This here broh must have had some kinda cool wit him
    I ain’t smooth or debonair quite like dat
    But I’m a try and throw what ever I got out there like dat
    See what happens
    I wanna see if I can do it too

    loved the flow for real poet
     
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    SistaMoon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True Story

    This poem was written sometime last week, when I met this beautiful man . He inspired me!!!! I appreciate all of you givin me the positive feedback.
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mhmm girl, you got caught out there...
    i sho nuff know how that is!
    thanks for this
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Mind Blown

    It bees dat way sumtymes--nice piece--captured thessence of the initial moments when we are captivatedand then captured--Amun-Ra

    :)