Black Poetry : He was clear.....

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why are dummy dummy dummy dummy......

    let me say that a gain DUMMY..

    going to ask him again....

    If someone says i,m not ready and i cant give you the full time and love care and attention that you need .Isnt that Clear ! woman..!And when he says there is someone out there for you and it will be worth waited .....

    GRIN.................that doesnt mean he means himself! :thinking:


    YOU dummy....

    You have to balance yourself in youre dreams visions and facts Woman dont fool yourself..

    ITs clear open youre eyes and ears..

    Go trough Lady...
    go trough..
    go trough it....


    Plus miles away.....
    Plus not knowing him realy youre not shure if its there when youre together...
    if its strong..
    Plus mistic things that hapopend could be anyone tha woman Bla bla bal..
    Plus it was not strong enough for him wanted to pick up tha phone..

    But but but but but but........
    tha chats ,tha songs,
    was that wrong.....?

    Let go libby ...
    let go.....

    but but.....
    why does it feel wrong??
    but .....what let go...

    Go trough it...
    again for so long ...
    Let go ...dont dream on....
    Follow tha life that everyone is living now....
    back in to tha shelf...or just
    have some good time ...

    I will let go ..
    and i would have sooner..
    i would have if there were less rights than wrongs ...
    before..
    WAs he she ?
    Was she he..?
    aww that would have made it even more beautifully !
    no i,m not a lesbi....

    STOP IT STop it......

    Go trough it...

    Than why was it so deep..
    was it because on that lasrt weekend in that terrible year...
    he/she was there?
    Was he?she youre canal to touch me?
    to help me lift me..?
    Or was he just a muse to me ...
    songs, art ,poetry...?
    My mind drifted to him...in silent places for years...
    as i looked for him in strangers faces...
    were they right when they called me weird..?
    but what about those beautifull revealing moments?
    what about....
    what about...
    what about...

    that ...
    and that ..

    GO TROUGH ..
    GO TRouGH IT ..

    it hurts ...

    Let go....

    you survived...
    the first time..

    it was misty...
    but he made it clear..

    he said i,m sorry.......

    i,m not ready........

    What more do you need to HEAR!


    Besides ask the lord...
    he is alway,s clear...
    So put it aside lady ...
    dont wait any longer....


    LOrd if this man is not ment for me
    ...tha way it was ment for a woman and man lovers other half one flesh...

    to be....


    Than guide me to tha one....


    that is ment for me....








    sorry ...

    but for myself ..

    i had to make it clear...
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well it was crystal clear to me, I heard every word you said. continue to speak poet...we hear you.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well it was loud and clear ova here tight drop
    always a pleasure reading you

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said i hear u loudly too speak on !!!!
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its ok guys....(cry)and dont blame no one you know ...i will still love ya all
    ...things are the way they are..
    this is my path...
    how about that...


    i changed the last lines ...
    cause i can only ask god for guidance....
    for new good things to come....



    moving on ...

    in that at a lot of times cold hard world and more colder to come..


    i,m alright ... (right)


    lord keeps me warm..




    is all good like this...


    i,ll put ....tha solitary in tha songs....
     
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    yeah i know what you mean...
    a lot of catz just aint ready nowdays...
    timing is everything...and the time will come
    for you when everything aligns perfectly.......cause it was meant to be...
    this was a great poem...
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes we just have to keep moving
    you never know what good things
    are in store for you...
    give your heart to someone who deserves it

    keep it flowing sister poet...
     
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