Black Poetry : ...He Understands Me...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Written b4 i got married, about my husband…


    I can’t believe he’s the way he is
    After all that’s happened to us
    I can’t believe his love is the way it is
    When I've done things for him to not trust
    I can’t believe he can hold me so tight
    When he knows how ill I am
    And yet he still loves me with all insight
    To see into my soul again

    I don’t understand all of the reasons
    Why my baby loves me so
    And maybe I shouldn’t know the reasons
    And should just be happy with the result
    I can count on both my hands
    All the times he was mistreated
    By me, he was my supposed man
    Yet still he was wrongly misleaded

    I can’t understand how he does it
    How he understands how I think
    Not many people will ever know it
    But I think the way I do to see
    I wanna see, how people view me
    In the criticizing of my mind
    How they judge the way I think
    By the things I do in my life

    I can’t believe the way he is
    After all that’s happened between us
    But I’m so happy he’s the way he is
    And that we are built on love and trust
    If anyone was to ever ask me
    If I’d mistreat him again
    I would boldly answer “why do you ask me?”
    Cuz I want to marry this man…
    :love: :kiss: :love:
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is oh so sweet....
    i guess this just shows that he was your destiny!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D thanks girl!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    spoken so freely he was most def ya visional love
    for life time dis was awesome
    u now rest in the arms of his comfort
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats so very tru rich:D...thanks...
     
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    most welcome

    continue to hold dis faithful love in ya heart
     
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    this is so beautiful. Looks like Fate knew the results all long :wink:
     
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    This is a very strong peace to thy own self be true the beginning of understanding self. I love your work you are very wise.
     
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    Hey Lovely, :wave:

    This is such a beautiful and sweet piece written from your heart.

    It is wonderful to read how much you love one another!!

    I know you know this must be fate!!

    Cherish your times together, I wish I had a love like this!!

    All my best to the two of you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    hey lovely
    this is so wonderful
    very nice
    Peace
     
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