Black Poetry : he touched my sadness

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  1. hadassah

    hadassah Active Member MEMBER

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    this is how he is
    very forward
    taking me aback
    always

    challenging me
    to face
    myself
    through
    his poetiks

    yes, i could
    just
    stop going
    back

    but he is truth

    he brings light
    in dark spaces
    and
    other places
    i would
    keep hidden

    yes, he is
    blunt
    but I like
    the way
    he speaks
    to me

    using humor
    when my world
    is unfunny

    but...
    but

    I laugh
    so comfortably

    he awakens
    sleeping
    things
    in me

    he shakes
    my consciousness
    he angers
    me

    he lulls me
    strokes me
    pleasures me

    he joins and
    invites me
    into
    this/our/my
    complete
    madness

    last night
    I opened
    another door
    and
    let him
    touch my sadness...

    hadassah
     
  2. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dassah....

    whoaaaaaaaaa!

    thank you sis!

    mojo
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if he must know you...

    ...let him know the whole of you.
    nothing like being touched on all fronts
    thanks for sharing such a beautiful piece.

    peace.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YES OPEN YA HEART AND ALLOW THE SADNESS OUT!
    THIS PIECE WAS FELT WIDE OPEN
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To bring light to gray
    or to share when he can not
    that is a friend worth letting in

    thanks for sharing
    loved the peice
    thanks
     
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