Black Poetry : he touched me

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  1. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can remember the day
    i can remember the hour
    i can remember the second
    i can remember the feeling
    i felt
    when
    he touched me

    it was that first valentines day
    we spent together

    i cooked

    he ate

    we sat

    me in the chair
    him on the floor
    and he slowly
    traced my ankle
    with his finger
    going -500 rpm
    one rotation took
    almost and hour
    and that almost took
    my breath away

    but that wasn't
    THE TOUCH

    it was when
    his words
    seeped into my skin
    permeating my spirit
    brightening my aura
    changing my life
    touching my heart
    embraced the ugliness of me
    and turned it into beautiful

    it was when
    he made me
    complete
    through simple
    conversation

    that he touched me
    and made
    me whole

    diva08 (c) 2003
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diva,

    Like the "touch" of this scribe!

    Well done!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    dam!

    this was tight!!

    told ya'll the ladies was holding back :D

    pd

    GOTCHA!!! :toast:

    :x: :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice i love how u bring thangz
     
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    sista diva dddddthis was toutchi to me.......
     
  6. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you. :)
    can u tell i'm happy?
    "if you're happy and you know it write a poem..."

    diva08
     
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    loving this flow...
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dis is...

    awesome...sis! :)
     
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    Nice flow Diva.
     
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    wow...what a touch...a memory etched in the realms of unforgotten and cherished reflections...

    very good read and write...

    ine.
     
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