Black Poetry : He took......me

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He took me in his arms…
    And had me in this dream

    Birds sing and angels dance
    Playing in the moon light
    he touch my soul
    invaded my spirit
    and conquer my mental
    He took me…..

    Seem like summer rain
    Pouring down as the sky cries
    Yearnings burn deep inside…..

    He touch my body
    and lighting strikes
    And the earth begins
    ...........to shake
    as my love flows unto him
    wild and lose releasing
    the storm…
    Hitting the spot
    I love the most..
    Making the
    Sheets wet and
    my love sticky
    On high….
    As the fire
    …………..burns

    Playing in this dream
    Up and down here we go
    Folding as one
    Night fun looking in his
    eyes as he makes me
    hot
    …………hot
    feverish desires
    burns

    He took me in his arms…
    And had me in this dream
    Birds singing
    Angels dancing
    As we did it
    Again
    and
    …………again
    Around and around
    Within the night light
    He set my soul on fire
    As my body aches
    With the passion he gives
    Loving me like a lady
    His Queen
    The Gemini moon shines
    Upon our love
    Turning into the Virgo sun

    He took me in his arms…
    And had me in this dream
    He took
    ………………… me

    2004
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another A-ONE DROP :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    you ain't lyin' when you said he took you. :lol:

    And he did all of this in your dream? This is a baddddddddddd brotha. :D

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
  4. unfoolish1223

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    thies was nothing but fire keep doing your thing
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so deep and real ...dang...he almost took me too :huh:
    you got it going on...keep going
    luv at ya...queentswana
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's beautiful when
    ya taken into the
    folds of comfort
    and the feeling of lovin
    he took u in rapture
    tyte drop sistah Queen
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$..within side a dream can be wonderful
    it was a rapture indeed
    thanks for all the love on this one
    glad ya enjoyed my brother King

    queentswana..the warmth of he the
    comfort of he yes indeed
    took me in a rapture..glad you likes

    unfoolish1223..glad ya likes

    Monetary..ya know and i tried to over sleep:lol:
    he just took me your support is great

    THEONE..thank you!!!!

    thanks yall for all the support on this on
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS A NICE DROP!!!!
    QQ, WHAT BROTHER DOING THIS TO YOU, QQ
    LOLOL
    MUCH LOVE!!!!!
     
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    And what a way to be taken, powerfully sensual.
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OO, this is lovely, sister. I specially like the Gemini moon and Virgo sun part. :glasses:
     
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