Black Poetry : He took a piece of me...

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He took a piece of me and i want it back
    i was only seven he didnt care about that

    He only want what a thief would want
    like a thief in the nite he stole

    what was precious to me and my first
    only seven years old at that time it didnt take its toll

    nite after nite he would have his way
    for me to be afraid, reclusive in the day

    changes that mamma couldnt see
    oh how i wish he would let me be

    i know what he was doing was wrong
    and now some years later i'm pouring my heart out on this song

    because he took a piece of me that i won't get back
    to never experience true love please world cut me some slack

    when i have so many baby daddies
    now that my life crappy

    because he took a piece of me
    oh why won't he let me be

    dont look down on me because i had so many lovers
    i know i'm worth more than just under the covers

    because he took a piece of me
    oh why wont he let me be

    but i'm alone and afraid
    to live inside this dark world of mine in a cave

    a cave of fear, deception, guilt shame
    yet i feel he's the one to blame

    because he took a piece of me
    oh why wont he let me be

    even tho i'm grown i'll still afraid because i fear
    he would hurt me again
    [email protected] him to be left with this heavy cloud and no friends

    to neva understand why I'm the way i am
    dont trust nick, dave, mike or sam

    because he took a piece of me
    oh why wont he let me be

    but yet i must somehow cope and get through
    to one day experience true love thats true

    and i will move on to become the woman my children need
    instead of my lusting desires and greed

    because he took a piece of me
    oh why won't he let me be


    i wrote this because as a parent i talk to my children about this sort of thing. i've been noticing alot of teacher, preacher whoever with authority is having sex with our kids. and we must not be afraid to talk about this touchy subject. let our kids know they can come to us about anything. so that our kids can grow up and live happy. instead of life filled with misery and grief. i wrote this for anyone whos experienced this kind of thing. i'm not saying whether it happen or not. i'm just saying talk to your kids before its too late.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, it's pieces like this that saden's and angers my heart...and the angry part is, you don't know who to really get angry at!
    Altho you'll never forget, but there will come a time...you'll forgive, otherwise, your baggage will trail you...no matter where you go.
    7 is still locked in your heart...but...
    Drop to your Knees
    for the right keys
     
  3. nevar

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    to queen

    thanks for the love.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was deep and had a powerful message..Thanx 4 writing this piece..

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks drizzle. we must break the silent barrier.
     
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    this was deep and sad
    how one can strip and take
    leaving a painful trat to the
    heart.......may the soul be
    comforted & blessed to heal

    very touching scribe on my heart
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for showing me love.
     
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    Deep Sista Nevar
    This was felt Poet
    Much Love
     
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    YO POET I'M FEELING THIS
    THOUGH IT HAS NEVER HAPPENED TO ME I CAN STILL FEEL YOUR PAIN
    PAIN IS PAIN
    AND I ESPECIALLY HATE WEAK *** PEOPLE WHO TAKE ADVANTAGE OF KIDS MAN THAT'S CRAZY
    AND THIS SICK SOCIETY IS GETTING CRAZIER

    WE NEED HORMONE CONTROL 4 REAL

    DSS
     
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    because he took a piece of me
    oh why wont he let me be

    I love how this goes through it. Yah abuse really messes up a lot of people. You can link stealing to poverty. But I wonder what the causes of abuse are and how we can stop it.

    flow on
     
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