Black Poetry : He spoke poetry to me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by krazelyricks, Nov 12, 2005.

  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I saw a masculine king on a poetic stage with an elastic high
    He smiled at me and I felt like snapping my fingers and saying "soul release" with the first the word, why?
    Because as he walked by me I could have sworn it made me wet
    Not wet as in what you're think I bet
    But wet to hear more of his poem
    A long love poem
    So long it's not norm-
    al
    Just for this fellow

    As I look at him starting from his feet
    A a verb came to me and it expanded as it made love to me
    I felt it expand from his body to me
    Oh how wonderful this verb was because it had me shaking in place and dreaming of walking over to him instantly
    Weak in my knees quickly
    Yeah, as he spoke poetry to me

    His poetic verbs had me looking in his face and chest
    Giving me so many nouns and pronouns at once that it was hard to digest
    Oh how it was the ultimate test
    For me not to climb on him and prove why krazelyricks was the best
    As I combed his body with my eyes so intimately
    So throughly
    As this man spoke poetry to me

    His words felt like they were caressing me
    As every word left his body
    And hit me
    Deep in the heart of me
    I left the world to see
    Just what this poem meant to me

    As my eyes hit the spot that most girl's eyes tend to stray
    I got a whole nother poem in one and hey
    It made me squirm in my seat and scream to myself that day
    When his eyes met mine I could tell he was feeling the same way too
    As an orgasmic sight fell from my lips when he was through
    He walked off the stage and to another girl as he continue looking at me
    Speaking poetry to me
    Spoken poetry to me
    Speaking poetry to me
    Spoken poetry to me
    Speaking poetry to me
    Spoken poetry to me
    As he spoke poetry to me!!!!!!!!
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :welldone: Little Sis this was soo Phat.... I love the way you smoothed the whole scene out 4 us!​
     
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    ****, dont you hate when that happens.. lose ya mind in a mans words.. those are the only moments im not listenin to constant b.s.. because if he wasnt speakin to me.. ill never kno.. silly is the woman who dare challenges the truthfullnes of a perfect moment of communication!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa! lyricks u drop it like dat
    and was deep into the brutha splat
    this tyte as hell flow on lil sis..............
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes sis you brought us smack dab in the middle of this scene, his words grabbed you and wouldn't let you go. huh? Yeah, it can be that way and you described it to a "T". Great write!
     
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    Wow
    That was tight poet
    Im loving your flow
    My min needs more
    Nice piece poet
     
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    Hi there foxy :wave:
    My goodness it is so wonderful to read your poetry again my dear
    I just love this drop , it is indeed something about them open mic poets
    that just touch you in a amazing way..:)
    wow it is so good seeing and reading you dear :grouphug:

    Peace
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    first question...."did you get the digits??? after the show", j/k

    seriously though...wow
    not sure where to begin
    you have evolved before my eyes
    and I'm loving the pic
    I know you're grown now and all
    but you've grown up so much
    and your writing is amazing
    this was a prolific, entertaining,
    and alluring flow

    Maad love and respect on this piece...
    Loving it,
    Sage
     
  9. nevar

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    nice flow,flow on sister.
     
  10. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love everybody. I'm so glad that you all were feeling this. It's been a while but I'm glad that I'm back and with no drama in my life. I'm constantly at poetry shows now and releasing my mind poetically. It's so free when you're on a stage with a mic, you know. And it's always nice to hear someone else :angel1: LOL
     
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