Black Poetry : HE Speaks

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Feb 4, 2008.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm still here.
    Every battle u fight, I'll always be near.
    I hear every heartfelt word U speak annointed with tears.
    If U truly believe, I'll make all disappointments, uncertainties, & fears disappear.
    Replace them with knowledge, overstanding, stability, & good cheer.
    All I ask of U is when faced with obstacles, perservere.
    Remain steadfast & difficulties will pass.
    Only a selfish father's pleased when he sees his children sad.

    Since the beginning of time I had U in mind,
    So I won't forsake U now, your life is precious & divine.
    Just liken ME 2 the sun cuz when it rains, it still shines.
    Even though U can't see it, it's right there in the blue skies.
    And you're like the Earth which turns away in the hours of night.
    Only 2 return time & again & it still provides U with light.

    I'll never leave U stranded in the wilderness alone & scared.
    I'll never place on U a burden which is 2 heavy 4 U 2 bear.
    I'll never put U in situations if you're not mentally prepared.
    I only chastise MY children cuz I'm a FATHER who cares.
    I've gone nowhere.

    I just want U 2 stand firmly on your feet.
    I want U 2 be prudent & wise so U won't be easily swayed by deceit.
    Apply your knowledge so u won't quickly change what U believe.
    Like I've told your brothers & sisters before U, ask & U shall receive.
    4 MY children, I've made the sun stand still & parted the Jordan & the Sea of Reeds.
    I've made mighty nations fall, made the barren & virgins conceive.
    I've made mountains move & given life 2 the deceased.
    So 2 do 4 U is nothing at all, just follow the words I speak.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HI PositiveMindset
    Wow! Welcome Home!!!!!!
    It's so wonderful to read you again.
    For real
    Yes indeed you're still here
    He's still here.
    In all the battles we have face
    We was never alone. To have our
    knowlegde replace with understanding
    is a long road we all have to be willing to take.
    Your poem open me up.
    And it have lifted my heart.
    As it was written, and as it sure be.
    Looking forward to your knowledge power poet
    Keep bringing it

    Ashe!

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is something that I definitely needed to read today. Even though we know sometimes we forget! Excellent write!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PostiveMindset? Wow, brother, you have been missed. Welcome back! :)
    To be embraced by our father, with words of wisdom and comfort, oh what a blessing that is. Wonderful write. So looking forward to reading more.
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    well well now....

    let my people go off!!!!

    indeed.. this is great right here.....
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling you on this

    your strength
    and i was feeling the father who cares part too

    we need more to care

    peace poet

    feeling your passion
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gut feelings and power to the beat this was tyte
     
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    You got my respect poet, awesome drop ...
    Welcome back home!!
     
  9. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many heartfelt thanks 4 feel'n this, my people.

    Many times some wonder if JAH's still with us in our situations, not knowing that HE's never left. We are the ones who's left HIM, chasing after riches & earthly pleasures. Very few listen 2 HIM. Listen, FATHER knows best.
     
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