Black Poetry : He Sees, He Knows

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  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know he sees it
    his eyes will never close
    Yet he lets me endure this world's punches and blows
    He puts no more on me than what he knows I can bare
    And even though he punishes me
    I'm so glad he's there
    Cause life's evil does pain me and my strength does tempt to flee
    And even though I cry at night
    I know he watches me
    All the times I contemplate why my light doesn't shine
    Why he has decided to make me walk such a fine line
    But when the pain comes and the world gets tough
    He always reminds me that I'm a diamond in the rough
    That he sees
    He knows
    He's working on me
    That I've got to do better if I want to be set free
    And so I continue to walk this fine fine line
    Cause I know things will get better with time
    For he sees
    He knows
    All thats in store for me
    He see
    He knows
    He watches over me

    Monad.poetress
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For he will never leave your side
    just wait on him
    for he see all..
    never doubt him
    stand up on his word....
    cause trust he knows and he see all
    love your flow....hold on be strong
    keep the faith and all we be just find
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, He knows it all,
    Yet He won't step in unless we call.
    There's just something about that Name.
    So much love and passion
    That it removes all shame. :spin:
    All things shall work together
    To birth an extraordinary plan.
    Through our sufferings
    We learn and understand,
    That no devil in hell
    Can remove us from His hand.



    monad.poetress

    Your poem is so beautiful. It inspired me so much that I just had to do what mzblkangel did and glorify His faithfulness. I am sure your poem must have had the same affect on her as it did me. Thanks for sharing.

    ~j
     
  4. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let the choir say "amen"...

    There's no better feeling in this world than the knowledge that He is here with us, although many don't wanna believe.

    Tread that path steadily.

    Nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    strong flow ...........Amen to this
     
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    yes this is so true
    you are not alone :)
    this poem helps to
    remind us of that
    Peace
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And he is there all the more, when we think that he has forgotten us. Praise be, what a comfort knowing can bring.
     
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