Black Poetry : He says .... But I Wonder....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fallen in love is ever so sweet
    The sound of his voice
    Just the touch of his soul
    Into mine…do he know
    I am feeling him just the same
    as he takes me……..in his
    ……………..world

    Like a song long ago….

    He speaks so humble
    Telling me…..

    I turned his whole world around
    His walk even his talk
    Got new meaning to it
    He says…..I
    Gave him new life….
    Wanting to reach for the skies
    That I make him the man he is…

    But I have to wonder….

    Do he think about me…
    Late at night when all the world is sleeping
    Am I his dream?
    Can he feel my love,
    Embrace him in the night air?
    Do he knows he changed my life
    as I changed his…
    My world is so much brighter

    Like a song long ago….

    He speaks so humble
    Telling me…..

    I turned his whole world around
    Inside and out
    That I am his true love he found
    I was all that it took..
    To place his feet on solid ground
    That he lives his life for me…
    That he is crazy bout me and only me…
    That the madness has stop….
    And all he wants is me

    But I have to wonder….

    Do he knows what he have done to me?

    (C) 2004
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel....

    mm...mmm...mm....Nice flip. :wink:

    "Does he know what he has done to me?"

    The impact that we have on other's lives. We do not know unless they dare to share. Well done, sweet lady. :grouphug:

    :thanks: for sharing a special part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok I am going to throw a poetic party... U got it going working today! :geek: "stroke that pen"................... :bowdown:
     
  4. jazzymoonchild

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    Angel,

    You're on fire today!! :jumping:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another sweet release tyte joint sistah
    u on a roll i c ..........whewwwwwwwwwww!!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all... :luvv:
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    for the love up in hur....Peace
    Angel
     
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