Black Poetry : He said ..........(were is the meaning of words)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Auroraflower, Jun 28, 2009.

  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2004
    Messages:
    1,008
    Likes Received:
    35
    Ratings:
    +35
    He said.....



    I am the person that is going to love you more and more..


    he said....






    He said .....


    I am not going to leave you ...


    cause you are to beautifull but especially ..

    to good ..

    he said...




    He pushed everyfurniture around me aside and embrassed me ..
    after i told him where i,ve been trough and said...

    "'beautifull times arre comming for us ...""

    he said...


    He kissed me and said "' youre kiss ...i,m longging for more ...

    there is sumthing in youre kiss ...that i long for more...



    he said..




    He said ....after i asked him ....

    "'are you shure there is nothing there ..? are you over this relationship ?"'


    "'he said ... its a different kind of love ...but i am done with her ... ""

    he said..



    He said "' Ihad a Beautifull dream of you and me ......everything went well and told me about the dream.....how beautifull it was especially the night...""

    he said...


    He said ... "' we are going to build our world where no intruders can come in..



    he said....








    One day ..


    the phone ring...


    therewas a lady on the other line...


    asking if he was with me ....

    cause i was supossed to be a so called good friend...

    and that he left to go out Drunk...

    she asked him if i had seen him....



    cause he didnt Come "' home"' ..

    she said.......




    than he Said ...

    She cheated on me 2 times after i cheated on her one time..

    and i gave here another ..chance .....

    (you see there is a kid involved there)...



    so he said...


    and i believed...



    but he said........(crying )


    he ..... said...


    he said...


    he said...










    right....





    he said...
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Canada
    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2001
    Messages:
    3,759
    Likes Received:
    673
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    the near north
    Ratings:
    +836
    in searching for something solid...

    ...we sometimes find ourselves out on that branch...alone...hoping and praying that everything they say...is as it is. oftentimes, it's not. WELL POSED.
     
  3. mizjoice

    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 4, 2007
    Messages:
    397
    Likes Received:
    36
    Occupation:
    to encourage and support
    Location:
    Memphis, TN
    Ratings:
    +36
    all too often....what is said and what is meant are two different things. You did something very delicate, very tentative, and very different here. wellcrafted, poet.
     
  4. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 28, 2009
    Messages:
    19,252
    Likes Received:
    5,505
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +5,560
    This was tuff to read cuz I've seen it played out SO many times in life with friends and relatives.

    You told every woman's story who has experienced this. :bowdown:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    he said .....is a living tale told daily by many .....I fell ya sis
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Words, that sound like they are full of truth, are sometimes rehearsed lies, that when found out, can pierce like a knife. I felt your words poetess.
     
Loading...