Black Poetry : He said, She Said...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Sep 16, 2007.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just talking with him
    Stimulating
    Conversation
    Causes a...
    Cessation
    a
    Lag
    in the sands of time
    It's a lull that you can brew some tea in
    And let the world just steep
    Eventually
    Those granules of time would seep deep
    And that cup of water would be charged
    with intrinsic energy
    and the power of the universe
    It's all there waiting for you and me
    For every man and every woman
    Each sister and each brother
    See what can happen
    When we just talk to each other?
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    I really enjoyed this piece. There is nothing
    like good conversation and communication.
    Very nice write...indeed:)




    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yep i see now ! indeed talking can change it all .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you 4Everluv, yes nothing like good conversation and communication.
    Talking can surely enhance what's there, thank you Rich.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    alot can happen

    when people communicate

    there is a certain energy

    understanding the placement of the energy is the hard part

    great piece here poet

    such depth

    and him must be very deep huh?

    peace poet
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, understanding the placement of that energy is the hard part, but it can be done. Thank you So'ja.
     
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    this is beautifully written sister watz

    put me in a whole other frame of mind...........

    well scribed poetess
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy to know my words could do that for you Brother Info. Thank you.
     
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