Black Poetry : He Moved Me

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He Moved Me...Mentally
    with wisdom words and his
    spiritual intellect



    He Moved Me...Physically
    tall
    dark
    handsome
    with beautiful
    mesmerizing eyes
    strong hands and
    tight end



    He Moved Me...Intimately
    sensual touch accompanied with...
    a
    long
    sensual
    yet
    intense kiss
    intertwining lips in the midst of ...
    a secret tryst



    He Moved Me...Psychologically
    sending subliminal
    messin' with my mental
    messages through
    jokes and scenarios

    Told me, "You don't want me, you've probably
    got a man already. I can't imagine me being
    1st on your list"

    What list? :confused:

    Now you're GAY
    That's a twist



    He Moved Me...from
    360 degrees of heated compassion to
    360 degrees of air cool sarcasm

    but...

    Every-body plays the fool, some-times
    It may be factual, may be cruel



    Guess it was just my turn...Again



    (c) 2001 Essence of Aminata all rights reserved
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's just beautiful

    how love can move us
    and into yo eyez was
    no surprise of movement
    yet ya heart and soul moved
    at great speed of his essence:heart:
     
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    you moved me with this one. i'm at a loss for words. talkin' bowt an eye opener.

    enjoyed your words

    zhay
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich

    this was a surprise to me...
    but the way things were going it
    shouldn't have been

    my 3rd eye was open I just refused to see
    and continued hopin


    onzhay yes I have to say this has been an eye opener. I'm learning to appreciate the direct approach more and more on a daily.

    it hurts less...
     
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    sometime

    even our 3rd eye is blind
    we get into a mist of thangz
    and get lost til we learn on a
    continue base....:heart:
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you

    on this my sista. This is not unfamiliar ground for a brotha. There are those times when we simply want what we want...to be. 3rd eye, be damned.

    I feel you.

    thanks

    BRB
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    afri, this piece heyah, has left me speechless and moved deeply. wowww...i have read it twice and i am still moved. well done, dear friend.
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lister

    sis, I thank you...for you have moved me...poetically :eek:
    and you have moved me...emotionally :heart:

    thank you!
     
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