Black Poetry : he made me cry

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i called my homegirl the other day
    to tell of her the news
    about what this ***** done to me
    it just seemed untrue

    now me and him haven't exactly been on the best of terms

    so the words i spoke to her
    were no shock at all

    but see the thing is
    she missed the whole point of it all

    me and my man
    see "we" had "had it bad"
    and to tell yall the truth i didn't know if we were gonna last
    (yeah THAT bad)

    now i must admit a girl was a bit
    uptight

    from the few fights that we had
    had that night

    but the end result was of something to be captured
    like a photogenic ,kodak, orgasmic moment stuffed in a bottle
    so that i can have it again
    now i don't know if u get it yet
    or if iam goin' over yall's head
    but the boy did something to me that i will never forget

    see i just had to tell
    of this special moment to someone
    that united us back

    and mended our broken hearts all
    throughout the cracks

    see me and my man was doin' our thing
    and then all of a sudden

    my right leg began to shake
    as if i was havin' convulsions or something

    and an emotional overflow of "him"
    came bursting through
    and then i began to cry
    which i normally i don't do

    now don't get it wrong
    "i told my friend "
    cause i was the least bit upset at him

    hell i couldn't control my tears as they began to fall
    he then looked over at me and asked
    "is anything wrong?"

    i just wiped my face and simled
    and said not at all

    as i layed there
    i thanked him
    for once in my life

    for something i could never imagine
    making me think twice
    of the fears and doubts of this man

    but i actually did it
    yes i did
    thank him

    for making me cry
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know the feeling!

    Oh my sister, I have to tell
    I know this feeling very well
    The ecstasy that doesn't come
    at a rave...
    But will make you think you heading
    for your grave
    The pure sheer passion that seems
    to be out of fashion
    When casual sex is all folks know
    But, what you experienced was
    unabashed ecstasy the kind that
    is just because
    Your tears you see were for you and
    he...
    He cause he couldn't understand
    But that my dear is one of the things
    that we have to teach our man...
    Reaching that place that don't need
    no words...making those sounds you
    never heard
    Weeping from the beauty of such fulfillment
    And then the wonderment if it will last...
    Fill it up baby and save it in a glass!
    I know how you feel!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' I gotta let u know
    it was pure wit ova flow
    it was da bliss
    u two had missed
    i truely understand dis

    the tears of fears
    was no mo
    so y'all let da feelings go
    now ya heart feels
    what dis man had to heal
    baby gurl ya just keepin
    it real !!!

    the essence of love
    was from above
    now u two cuddle
    like hand N' glove
    see ya man
    made u shake
    his flow wasn't fake
    those tears of joy
    roll from ya cheek
    now in memories
    of what's so sweet
    i feel ya motion of flow
    and i know of dis kinda
    show ...need i say mo.?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' I gotta let u know
    it was pure wit ova flow
    it was da bliss
    u two had missed
    i truely understand dis

    the tears of fears
    was no mo
    so y'all let da feelings go
    now ya heart feels
    what dis man had to heal
    baby gurl ya just keepin
    it real !!!

    the essence of love
    was from above
    now u two cuddle
    like hand N' glove
    see ya man
    made u shake
    his flow wasn't fake
    those tears of joy
    roll from ya cheek
    now in memories
    of what's so sweet
    i feel ya motion of flow
    and i know of dis kinda
    show ...need i say mo.?
     
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