Black Poetry : HE MADE LOVE TO MY MATTRESS

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was mid-day on a sunday,
    after church,
    after dinner,
    after dessert (me)
    went on round two,
    and you insisted on round three,
    I laid there tired and excited,
    you went up and down,
    round and round,
    and told me stop
    frontin like you aint
    hittin my spot
    for a moment i laughed
    then tried to hold back
    after 5 min laughs were slack
    I told him to long stroke me,
    cause i loved it so,
    when he backed up
    the truth would show
    He made love to my mattress,
    he and it had all the fun.
    I lmao,
    told him to let me get on top,
    put it in,
    and show him how its done.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol...........this was cute and crash bangin !
    nice twist
     
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    Do mattresses sleep? ...if so, your mattress will roll tonight :laugh:
    that was a fun read, thanks for sharing
     
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    If mattresses could talk...well, I guess this one just did, lol. I enjoyed this piece, as I do all your work poet.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

    that's why I'm very attentive (aka LISTEN) to women. :lol:

    Nice piece. :D
     
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    :haha: sede, now that was just wrong...how did they not know? this piece is funny and i enjoyed it immensely...

    one.
     
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    My sistah this one definetly brightened my spirits. How that mistake was made I won't even begin to imagine. But this was surely something will tell my friends about.
    Flow on
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol.. glad ya feel meh

    lol.. yea this one defiantely one of the pieces i enjoyed writing,... they say when you get them "good mattresses" your dreams come true.. lol.. well.. I have a memory foam mattress.. lol.. yall pik one of those up.. and youll have a night of laughs as well. :hearts4: :donttell:
     
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    girl you are a mess i enjoyed this alot
     
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    what the H.e.l.l. gurl you wild. the man didnt know he was humping the mattress. i smell a first timer yep. just had to ups this yep.:blush: :ref: :ref: :ref: :hammer:
     
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