Black Poetry : He Loves me...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Give praise in His name……

    It took me a while
    …………But now I rise
    Beat down
    Falling short
    Running wild
    Doing it my way
    But wasn’t moving
    Just standing still
    Wondering why
    Why has the world falling on me?
    Instead of me walking the world
    Why I wasn’t climbing
    But in the same spot I started out
    Standing still……no climbing
    See it took me a while
    No matter how much I fought
    I lost…..

    One day He touch me
    Said, daughter listen to me
    I lead you to the water
    Why you never drink?

    Tears began to run from my eyes
    At that point
    And I lifted my hands in praise
    Turned around…
    Stop beating myself up
    He have always been with me
    And He loves me…..for me
    As I try my best...He never left me
    See it took me awhile
    I had them days I wish I had stayed asleep
    But He moved me no matter the trail

    One day He touch me
    Said, daughter listen to me
    I lead you to the water
    Why you never drink?

    Wondering why I fall short
    Wondering why always me
    I had turned my back
    When He took my hand
    And lead me…
    But I was to blind to see
    Walking into walls
    And I wondered why….
    See it took me a while
    But now I know
    He loves me…
    And I need to listen to my inner self
    For He speaks when I am lost
    See…
    ………see it took a while
    After all the temptation
    The anger
    The selfishness
    The pain
    He still spoke to me
    See…
    ……….See it
    See it took me a while
    And I am finally here…..
    I am worthy of His love…
    And He still loves me no matter what

    One day He touch me
    Said, daughter listen to me
    I lead you to the water
    Why you never drink?

    Today I drink….
    Give praise in his name……
    I can climb that mountian
    And I can walk the road
    The cloud have gone
    I am so blessed to be loved
    And I am His child no matter
    .........His child
    The darkness
    He will love me anyway
    But it took me a while

    But now I drink.........



    for ye the messanger......
    .......for He opened the
    eyes of the blind

    for He gave me my gift and I share
    (c) 2004
    Poetry Praise
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    keep sharing the gift u so been blessed with .......love the praise of this
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaawww!!! that was beautifully written!!!! i think i've fallen in love with that poem!!! poet, you are extraordinary!!!!!

    much love,
    plain.
     
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    :chef: He always feeds the soul when it's thirsty or hungry. We just have to want it and accept his gifts while we push pass the pains. :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis made me return inside i really love the flava u pose whewwwwwwwwwwww!
    womannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we all are blessed and sometimes we dont even know it
    until we are down and out....keep your head up high...for he still loves us
    down or up....feel his glory for he loves you no matter what you are going through....

    $$RICH$$..thank you for the loving support...and as long as I can write i will fo sho.....share his love share his gift he gave to me....do you know he loves you too?

    plainrhythm..fall on in the love he gives is powerful thank you for letting me know you vibe with my scribe..do you know he loves you too.

    caramelpython..feeds the soul and heals the pain...takes your hand in thick of the storm and walks beside no matter what...do you know he loves you too?

    When I thought I wasn’t worthy of his love
    He didn’t throw me away
    But walk beside me
    In the cold
    When I was hurt
    When I was wrong
    He still loved me
    See it took me so long
    To notice
    That he is always with me
    I am worthy in his eyes
    Not in her eyes
    Not in his eyes
    But my savior’s eyes
    Is all that counts…

    You can talk about me
    Put me down
    But I am rich in my love from him
    He woke me up
    He watches over me
    And he is all the friend I need
    See it took me long enough
    But now I see….


    Rich thank you again....for I am happy you can feel his power.....oh he loves me and he loves you...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome alwayz tyte write sis...............
     
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    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can relate to this right now. this is my life. it is very well written and i thank you for sharing...
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Rich...... :kickball:

    MissPoetik...happy you enjoyed


    peace
    angel
     
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    i give u big ups on dis one i just love the flava of it taste so good
    keep writting sista
     
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