Black Poetry : He Love's Me

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When it was all said and done,
    after the last time he hit you
    in the face.
    You still went to bat and
    defend his worthless case.
    "Oh, but he loves me."
    you
    said so adamantly;
    though you knew it wasn't
    true each time
    he kicked you in your spleen.

    The many times you cruised,
    your make up thick
    and heavy hiding the various
    colorful bruises,
    You would smile and quickly dismiss
    anything your girls said about
    about leaving him and receiving your
    own bliss.

    You were stupid, many said behind
    your back.
    And it was pitiful that some
    didn't even try to help you
    simply because they didn't want to
    get involved or pick up the slack;
    So when it was all said and done,
    and the mist had cleared like the loosening
    of held breath;
    In the beginning
    he spoke his love for you,
    then it escalated to verbal abuse,
    that then left you as low and broken
    as the dew
    And now it's too late, because your a
    permanent visitor in the lap
    of Death.

    Copyright 2004 A.D/ "HyeKlass Publishing"
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Earthly Allure

    Wonderfully expressed....

    :thanks: for sharing :D

    :toast:
     
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    this was awesome flowing tyte scribing here wow!
     
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    Whoa

    I'm lovin this scribe, can relate to this situation myself. It made me feel sad especially @ the end.
    Thanks for sharing
     
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    No problem. Thank you all for the love. I've had a few of my lady friends that delt with dudes that had a problem hitting on them simply because in my estimation they[the dudes] were too scared to hit on a gtown man. Its truly sad when a man has to resort to hitting on a woman. Peace and blessings.

    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    :madd: Let he who strikes a woman be struck down by the hands of the vengeful and the wickedness be brought down upon him as a rageing storm! :teach:

    Nice poem poet.
     
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    Thank you so much monetary. The love is wel recieved. God bless bruh.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    Bless you python. I agree wholeheartedly with your statement.
    ~Earth Allure
     
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