Black Poetry : HE LOVES ME NOT, HE lOVES

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  1. free

    free New Member MEMBER

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    He said he did not, could not love me, he wanted to be on his own.

    You said you'd never leave me, if I'd draw nigh to you, you'd draw nigh to me.

    He loves me not, but you love me, he loves not

    When he told me he could not, would not love me, I could not think could not speak, eyes swollen from tears running like a leaky faucet.

    He loves me not, but you love me, he loves me not

    You said you would give rest, just come, lay my head upon your breast.

    He loves me not, you love, he loves not, but you, you so loved me!
     
  2. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I so know the feeling. One tells you that you he doesn't love you and there's another standing there with an open heart. I feel this one. Nice.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UNCONDITIONAL LOVE

    Free, love the one you're with- thanks for sharing. (enjoyable)

    1poetsought ~
     
  4. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Very nice....

    You should come over to voice chat...and read this poem. We would love to hear you.
     
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