Black Poetry : He Loves Me InDuBiTaBlY

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he told me he fell in love with me
    the first time he looked in my eyes,
    the moment he stared through the
    window that separated us the first
    time we met.
    I was clueless to who he was
    but he knew from my big beautiful
    brown eyes I was his babygirl

    I don't believe there has been
    a year gone by where he failed
    to tell me and each time he did
    I smiled a smile a mile wide
    ok, I know I'm exaggerating, but

    ~I'm sure you know what I mean?~

    Our relationship has grown closer
    and I quickly gained knowledge
    of who he was and the important
    role he would play in my developement
    exhibiting quality examples and
    setting the standards I should expect
    and appreciate in a relationship

    ~and never settle for less.~

    I understand the phrase,
    "Father Knows Best"
    I'm truly blessed
    I thank God for my father's
    time, wisdom and love
    that nurtured me into the woman I am today.

    A tribute to the only man who will always love me.
    ~I love you Daddy~


    Scribeaboutit!
    It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh that was so nice...I hope you give him this poem for Father's Day...can't they just make you expect so much more for yourself...and when a brother starts tripping you are like, what? You MUST not know my daddy! hahahaha...good piece.
     
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    Coco...

    for me...this peace was bitter~sweet...

    beautiful!!!:)
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was just beautiful Coco...and I'm sure when your Daddy reads it he will appreciate every loving word....

    btw...it's good to see you here...you been away too long...

    K
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How sweet it is...

    There is nothing in the world like that Daddy love!
    Read Heartbeats..."Good for Something"...that one
    had me crying girl...just so on point!
    Appreciate your father's who are still with you, while they
    are still with you!
    R.I.P Daddy!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is nice to know that some daddys are appreciated
     
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    awww

    this was so sweet :)

    true love :heart:

    pd
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    madd sistahly love

    redlady, I have read it to him and
    I also had it framed for him.

    Afri, I appreciate your reply. :)

    sherykah, You right about. I guess no matter how old I get....
    in his eyes I'll always be his babygirl,
    so I'll live with it. :laugh:


    Kitana, He loved it. My Mom said his head grew bigger. :laugh:
    BTW. I appreciate you. :)

    Shaz, Yeah fathers need appreciation too.
    If you are a father HAPPY FATHER'S DAY.

    msluciousb. That's true daddy's love is forever. :)

    poeticdelight, I'm glad you liked it.


    Thanks for taking time to read and respond,
    It's appreciated


    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CCB

    lovely peace sis. I hope he likes it.






    One
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now, this is it right here! thank you!

    alyce
     
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