Black Poetry : He loves me he loves me not

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  1. kaly

    kaly Member MEMBER

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    He loves me
    He loves me not
    Are the words I say again
    And again
    About my man / friend
    Understand
    Though we kiss make love and hold hands
    explore foriegn lands
    and do all the things we possibly can
    I repeat
    to a beat


    He loves me
    He loves me not
    As I pick the petals off this flower
    Hours after hours
    Till it's finally devoured
    I think about the wrong you've done
    like come in and out of the life of me and your son
    I let you back in everytime thinking one day it will stop
    But till then I'll be saying
    He loves Me
    He loves me not


    Though sometimes it hurts
    we still manage a way to make it work
    try to show little man good things happen
    when two loved ones are into church
    we don't want him to search
    for love through a step mom or step dad
    so we try to give all the things we never had


    I'm down to my last petal
    He loves me
    He loves me not
    If it isn't love
    can someone please tell me what I got
    He still leaves in the middle of the night
    Returns right before the morning light
    We argue and we fight
    He knows that I know he ain't right
    Gone or here I long to hold him oh so tight
    cause whether he loves me
    Or loves me not
    I know I love him with all my might
    ****.....
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    kaly

    ...a very beautiful piece.

    You have a great flow. I'm loving it.

    Unfortunately, we all may experience that situation or something similar to it in our lives at one point. But, nevertheless, we live on.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I UNDERSTAND

    nice flow,
    we can only hope.
    that when u find out the truth,
    that with it--you can cope.
    don't let the plant,
    the so called flower.
    lie to you,
    for it holds no power.
    like the palm readers,
    that tell u your life.
    every answer they say,
    we know aren't always right.
    so never forget,
    that love is shared by two.
    and no matter what the flower says,
    if u love him--he'll love u..................(nice poem)

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  4. SwtT

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    Where did you come from?

    Kaly, out of all the poetry today, I do believe that you are a extremely great poet. I must say im pleased at everything you write and Im never let down. I expect sumthing good from your title and I must say i always read a good flow from u. Welcome 2 destees n keep up the flow and within it, you will grow
    :smile:
    SwtNess:toast:
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow Kaly welcome indeed I can very please with your work and I can only say DAYUM I feel your pain peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    tyte poem..much love :)
     
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    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweeeeet.

    One.

    - Ikoro
     
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    Thanks everyone for your support, you're the best!!
     
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    awesome scribing here ......much love on this one
     
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