Black Poetry : HE LOVED THE WIND

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved the way he arose
    To meet the morning.
    So beautiful he was and
    Dazzling in my bed.

    I loved the way he shared
    His dreams and ideas.

    Then one day,
    There came a
    Strong wind and it
    Blew upon him.

    I held him,
    but I could not hold him.
    I loved him,
    But he loved the wind.




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    Joyce

    Very nice, mellow flow,loving this one, very nice write sister.
     
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    very radiant flow this was sweetly laid sistah
     
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    THis sets a very comfortable feeling nice drop
     
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    Very beautiful
    and soul soothing!
    Sweet drop!
     
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    Oh my....now this one...truly left me speechless...
    it just hit my :heart: like lightening...at the end...
    WOW... :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  7. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug: Thank You Poets! :grouphug:
     
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    :laugh:..you so loud
    just teasing :)
    your flow was so nice
    i enjoy the sybolism deeply
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: Now that I look at it...that is pretty big ain' it? :lol:
    I guess I was just too excited that so many had expressed their "like" for the poem. Thanks Blue for reading me. I'll try to be mo calm next time :D
     
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    dear Sister
    flow your excitiement...:)
    it was just so funny
    when i page down
    i enjoy reading your poems...
    it feels so good to laugh 2
    and I thank you twice
    for the read of your wonderful poem
    and the laughter you bought to my heart with your reply
    still loving your flow :)

    Peace~n~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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