Black Poetry : He Knows that He's Got Me

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He knows that He's Got Me
    Cuz I'm buggin again

    Won't call, he knows that it bugs me
    But we can't even pretend

    As my mind tries to sort out all the opposition
    I recluse again
    Trying to numb my anxious thoughts with a coo melody
    But all it does is make me wanna throw darts
    Aimlessly again

    Why must you turn my heart inside out?
    Why must you always figure me out?
    There are so many things that I want to know.

    How long must we play this game,

    How far can we go?

    When I get home at night
    I can't wait to let out a deep sigh
    Relief is what I feel when my emotions are hidden
    In room
    When it's still

    I've been waiting so long
    It seems longer by the day!

    I can't sit still
    My body caged in a lock down
    Of emotions

    Just want to pour open the damm of my heart
    And let you know

    That I've admired you from afar
    Still not too hasty too let you emotionally scar
    I choose wisdom
    Though sometimes
    The silence
    Is a heavy weight
    It cleanses my soul.

    Desert Storm
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What the heart knows ...
    the "Heart" eventually shows.
    I can relate to this piece, thanks for sharing it.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man DS

    you are such a beautiful and sweet person

    he must be the same

    don't torture yourself

    good things come to those who can bear the wait

    your time will come

    the problem is having the patience it takes to get there

    just me i know

    peace

    GLAD TO SEE YOU'RE WRITING AGAIN



    hey

    is it DS or DSS

    DSS or DS

    hahahhahaaha

    just i'd make a crony joke before i sign off
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Waiting around, being unsure when feelings run deep is no joke. Hopefully he realizes that he's got a jewel. I hear ya poetess.
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queentwanza, thanx for showing some love to this piece, you feel me?
    Street, you such a treat! ha ha ha... I know that was corny... I don't know, what you think, DSSSS ha ha haha, i'm just playing... thanx for blessin me one time, bruh! I feel da luvvies!:coffee:

    watzinanme, maybe i should realize that I'm a jewel and not let nobody get me down. Hee,hee,hee, I think i'm combined with both realizations here. Thanks for the feedback.

    Thank you all for stopping by, y'all come back now!

    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely da heart reveils all .....
     
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