Black Poetry : He KeEpS On PaSsInG Me By...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ~Provakativ~, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. ~Provakativ~

    ~Provakativ~ Active Member MEMBER

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    You know I see him and I hear a conflict rise
    Whether or not to smile his way or keep passing by...
    He keeps on passing me by...
    Not even a hello don't want to come on too strong
    Want to do things right
    Because right now I'm alone...
    I'm a big girl now with big dreams
    Who wants big girl things
    and a big boy..better yet a grown man on her team
    It doesn't matter what your dream
    If we can share it than more it would mean

    He passes me by and I don't know whether to speak
    So I put my thoughts on paper about how when he smiles how it makes me weak
    Almost enough to knock me off my feet
    But enough to make me woozy when I hear him speak

    And on this paper my thoughts do rise
    How I would love to have him between these thighs
    But not to fast..not too quick
    I'm a grown *** woman, Consider yourself special if an invitation you get

    He keeps on passing me by and I feel my excitement rise and when I get enough nerve to speak
    The words get frozen like a frosty from Wendy's...
    ****, he already left again
    And he didn't even notice me

    The blood running through my veins feels like its been suffocated by cellophane and his image is burned in my brain

    And I could see you and me
    and I could feel your energy
    and I could see you be with me
    and I could one day see exclusive no longer being my enemy

    But you know these feelings I got I'll just let them ride
    Because I'm not the one to front
    I keep my emotions to my self
    Even though its you that I want

    He keeps on passing me by...though this time he gave me the eye
    And now that I got your attention
    I guess there is one more thing I have to mention

    I've been feeling you for a while
    I like your personality and I like your style
    Not trying to rush into anything

    Want to get to know you and what makes you sing
    What makes you mad what makes you depressed
    How do your find your calling
    Is your love the best?
    Is your mama your heart?
    What are you looking for, what are your blessings
    Would you rather laugh or observe quietly
    What makes your soul sing

    What I'm saying is...can I get to know you....
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this is def..to the bone
    yeah i know that feeling
    and asked that question
    nice one..
    feeling this flow
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this play in heads all the time i feel ya on dis
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop...Maybe he'll let you in, but if not someone else will....
     
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    this was supa tyte...
    keep drop'n joints like dis
    cause this piece
    was straight buttery...
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smooth...dont let him pass :)
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ready

    Ay yo, that was real tite. Shii, you can holla at me... naah, strait up, i'm cool. Getcho man, yunh...

    Respect
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is sweet:) i liked reading this:)
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this scribe...
    a mental play....
    dont let him pass you .....:angel1:
    tight drop
     
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