Black Poetry : He is....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by krazelyricks, Aug 18, 2006.

  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He is my dark chocolate craving in the middle of the night
    The lemon to my maraine pie, can't fight the erge to take a bite
    The lemon pepper on my chicken wing
    The highest note that the hottest chilli pepper in the world makes me sing
    He is.....

    He is the cream that covers my pie
    The fudge brownie that gets me hyped and high
    The thick syrup that covers my fluffy pancakes
    The bubbling sound that my afternoon wine makes
    He is.....


    He is that candy on top of my ice cream
    The hot fudge on top of my ice that makes me cream
    The naked cherries on top of that ice cream
    He is the tempting drippings on the size of the cup that you lick you off clean
    He is.......

    He is my temptations
    My carbohydrate and fats neglections
    My highest and freakiest sensations
    He is.....
    He is.......him
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    he is to thee all one see him to be for completion
    i love this joint sis.............................................
     
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    Sounds like he is..."Yummiee!". :D
    I enjoyed this. Flow on!
     
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    krazelyricks:
    He sound good to the last drop...
    Tyte flo...
     
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    this is a real nice piece poet
    but when u say he is...
    then state again right after in your piece
    kind of too repititive-i getyour concept though
    try using more complexity in your poem poet
    6.5/10
    uno