Black Poetry : He is...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Oct 5, 2005.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He makes me so mad
    But my love still flows….
    The gentleness of him
    Is in me…

    Taking the ups with the downs
    Just trying to make it through
    Knowing the good oversees the bad
    My truth….
    Got my eyes wide open

    As the sun meets the moon
    My tears run…just for
    ….a touch of his hand

    In the abyss of his love
    As love clouds contain us
    A collection of perfection
    Six-something of a creation
    A slightness of stimulation
    With calm motivation
    Inside of our conversation
    I meet my revelation
    Even with his reputation
    Knowing he is my heart
    No doubt about it…

    I can feel his embrace
    The love he likes to give
    Insight I see the growth
    Into one…..
    Seductive in his way
    A man of his word
    With a style of his own
    That makes him
    …………. stronger than average
    My soul's joy…

    He is six-something
    The supplier of my love
    He is the one who lifts me
    As I lose control and get tongue tied
    When it comes to him….
    He don’t even know it…

    As I close my eyes and wish upon a star
    His love will grow….Spoiling me in his way
    In the abyss of his love


    He is…all I need to know
    The perfect mate for my soul

    (C) 2005
    ~ROSE~FIRE~
     
  2. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She is....

    She is...
    the reason I woke up this morning
    with a smile on my face
    Her vibe is my grace
    It could never be replaced

    She is...
    the breath that I take
    inhaling her deeply in my essence
    for even when she's not in my presence
    I hold her captive in my flesh

    She is...
    this phenomenal entity
    taking this bull of a world by its horn
    while style & class is shown
    anything less than the best would never be condone

    She is...
    the pulse within my veins
    the guiding light when I can't see
    the voice of reason when I can't speak
    the feeling which makes me complete

    She is...
    my Blak Angel
    that protects me with her wings
    Serenades me when she sings
    all the good things that living life brings

    She is.
    love

    She is..
    LOVE

    She is...LOVE


    **MzBlkAngel...that's for the inspiration...I really love your piece and had to add on...Hope you don't mind**

    Peace,
    Driz
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MBA and BigDrizzle...

    that's tight. Ya'll collab together. :D

    :thanks:

    :toast:
     
  4. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the flow's I agree a collab'o would be tight.
    Nice way of placing the images angel. :look:
     
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    Mzblkangel, your flow was very sincere and comfortable, like you are so self assured about the love, I liked that. And then, I didn't expect to see a flow by bigdrizzle, such an endearing response. Yes, a collab would be nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow that was deep and felt the depth of it too
    y'all collab hit home .......flow on whewww!!!!!!!
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah, seems like he is, all that and a bag of chips...I salute you
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :great: job well done, that was awesome poet :great:
     
  9. bigdrizzle

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    Thanx QueenT...But I can not take any credit...All props must be given to MzBlkAngel for writing the real....I just added my 2 cents.

    Also, sending love back to Money, Python, Watz, & Rich..Thank you kind folks for all the encouragement/support.


    Much Kudos, Angel

    Peace,
    Driz
     
  10. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this poem it reminds me of my situation. it feels good when a man can move you like that.