Black Poetry : He is

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  1. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He is the twinkle in my eye
    He is the midnight summer sky
    That sneaks up on me in July
    He is the sun that lights my day
    He was the rain that washed away
    The tears I cried on yesterday
    He’s the one who held my hand
    When no one else could understand
    He is far more than just my friend
    His feelings are unconditional
    Far more than physical
    Mental
    Emotionally
    He comforts me
    By listening
    Whispering sweet nothings in my ear
    From far
    He is the only one that can save me
    Why
    Cause he’s my baby
    :love:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sweet...
    nice flow
     
  3. POETIC RAPTURE

    POETIC RAPTURE Active Member MEMBER

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    I love this. It just seems so innocent and pure.
     
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    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a beauty u pose'd here
    tyte scribe poet!