Black Poetry : He Is...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by amberly, Feb 10, 2003.

  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He is…

    He is so wonderful…
    The finest lustrous silk can’t compare
    to the smoothness of his elegant touch.
    his smile is my year round valentine
    he is so far beyond heavenly romance
    that even cupid himself can’t touch him

    He is so brilliant …
    the sparkles from rare pink diamonds
    can’t compare to the gleam of his presence
    He dissolves into my heart
    just as cotton candy on the tongue
    a blossoming petal on earth’s stem
    the most delicate roses could never be gentler
    and dare I say…

    I love him



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautifully written
    love him forever .............
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's a beautiful thing to express your love so sweetly...nice peace..

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  4. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall I'm just vibin with valentine, there is no he... this is just a poem. I just write my pieces, they aren't personal experiences. thanx for you words deeply


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    awesome!

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    Tight flow....looking for some mo.