Black Poetry : He Is Our Man

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  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He Is Our Man
    By Monad.poetress


    Never would I have thought that I could share my most prized
    possession
    But now my life has so many twists and turns-Too many bottled up
    confessions
    I never thought I'd fall in love with a man that wasn't completely
    mine
    I never thought to share his love I'd have to stand in line
    But his kisses are so sweet-even though I don't get them all
    No matter if he's with her today- I still run at the sound of his call
    Never in a million years did I think I'd stand for this
    But once I felt the fire of this man I was summoned by his kiss
    I never thought I'd care to hear him speak another woman's name
    But now I know we share this man-he's ours all the same
    His lovemaking is OURS
    His kisses our OURS
    He is OUR Man
    Just as if there was a blue print for it-we both are in his plans
    Separately we hold him-But together our love brings forth heat
    Intertwined and wrapped around our love makes him complete
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi...
    and welcome to...home away- from-home.

    my, my didn't you come in with a doozy :x: ...hope it was just a poem, cause this man is bad business. I like the script...push more our way...thanks for sharing.
     
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    monad.poetress ... Hello and Welcome ... :wave:

    This is very nice ... reminds me of the song ... "our husband is cheat'n on us"

    Please ... keep it flow'n ... :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Very Nice

    Monad

    WELCOME TO DESTEE

    I like this flow. I know it has so much truth in it. " I never thought to share love I'd have to stand in line "


    Torn isn't a bad thing. I recall in a song " Ereka sang I believe " maybe in another life time. "

    It's possible to be the one waiting in the wings, but settling for second isn't a bad thing. It it is meant to be it will happen. ( To secure one's self when caught in such a position, you have to wish them the most happiness, and the best. Wait, so that ( if ) when you do become the one, its not tied to anything you did to cause the breakup or tear. )

    Cause even in another life. I would want to be there and wait on lost love.
    I have loved and lost, but she ( :luv: ) still touched my heart and me hers... this I know. She will never be forgotten. I heard our song yesterday, and she danced with me for six minutes.. then she was gone again. :heart: see.

    :spinstar: I got to fix that lock on that closet. Those skeletons keep kicking it open when I'm not ready to dance. :spinstar:

    :help: :cry: I'm :cool: thanks for the tissue.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: I likes this, very strong emotions felt in this piece
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop welcome again sistah
     
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    A touchy subject, but the way you worded this made the reader want to "know" the situation even though we might not agree with it in theory. Well written.
     

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