Quiet Poetry Lounge : he is my best friend

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hadassah, Apr 16, 2001.

  1. hadassah

    hadassah Active Member MEMBER

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    he is my best friend
    and i am his
    we read pretty poetry
    and examine the
    intricacies of
    verse

    sometimes we
    rehearse
    the lines
    on quiet afternoons
    when breezes cool
    our naked pores

    i am his muse
    and he is mine
    we write ethereal
    images and lose
    ourselves in
    surreal scenes

    knowing what it
    means
    to be in love
    with a friend
    who is the sole
    inspiration
    for the movement
    of my pen
    upon the papyrus
    of his heart

    yet I am not free
    to be with him
    nor is he
    to be with
    me

    outside our
    world
    of
    poetry


    hadassah, 2001
     
  2. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wooooo

    I love what you're saying here. It is joy and pain in verse. Thank you for penning so elegantly, the plight of poetic lovers.

    B
     
  3. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well said

    poetess...and belahni...too true...and there do be a difference between "poetry lovers" and "poetic lovers"...sho you right! :D

    CELA
     
  4. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the touching

    of poets might be too dangerous and habit-forming...
    so I've heard.

    Str8 piece hadassah.

    mojo
     
  5. Destee

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    i too have enjoyed this peace
    so nice ... even if only in poetry
    a beautiful love it must be
    thank you for sharing it with me

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very lovely flow
    best friends ummmmm!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She's loving his pen, he's loving hers, and perhaps even more? This was a great piece on the reciprical admiration of another's flow.
     
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    tashatoya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice!

    Good drop poet i loved it, keep up with the beautiful words. I am anxious to hear more.
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh ...



    this one caught me...


    beautifull ...









    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    Touching... touching me ~
     
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