Black Poetry : He has me trippen (forreal)

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  1. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thinking of you
    listening to the sound of the rain on the window sill
    so many loves i thought i had before
    but this relationship with you i dont quite understand
    its like i think about you constantly
    staying up late just to talk to you
    my heart even beats your name
    just think we've only just met
    like jack and jill on that hill of love
    except instead of falling down
    we fall up into what feels like heaven
    right here on earth
    and to think i wasent gonna say anything
    i was going to just let you leave
    it obviously must have been part of Gods plan
    he sent my heart turning 360 degrees
    and when the journey was over you were standing in front of me
    smiling just as you did in my dreams
    reaching out your hand
    to let me in to what i think is the best thing
    that has happen since perms
    like McDonalds i want to give it to your your way
    weither verticle horizontal
    fast or slow
    make love to my mind
    as well as my soul
    for you to keep me near your heart is my prayer at night
    and when i think about it
    you're my fantasy
    everything that i need
    maybe one day we will grow to be
    the product of a everlasting bond
    between to people who feeling are strong
    strong enough to fall in love
    endlessly in a sea of me i want you
    to give your all to me
    and i will give you the same
    dam ... you got me trippen
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful sistah...luvn dis flo! flo on!
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was beautiful.....I liked......that was a tyte flow......
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush:...this is some realll stuff right here:)
     
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    I've drowned before too...

    whew...I'm so glad I recovered
    I couldn't concentrate on anything else...

    this was an honest expression of falling
    deeply, madly...smitten
    In love...

    Nice flow poet!
     
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    oh feelin your flow..
    much love...:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhh!! yes felt da depth of this scribe
    u open up places.....tyte write
     
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    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone for your replies
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm def feelin this piece.....
    and whut you dont think guyz feel like this at times???
    girl lemme put you on a minute.......and imagine this a response to
    this piece cause i cant front but this inspired me....




    how should i tell her without pushin her away...
    Just bein' round her makes my nerves shake...
    you see this girl is one of a kind
    and i think i love her...
    i adore her heart,adore her mind
    but yet i dont wanna smudge her...
    so instead i'll play it off like i aint feelin' her...
    got her comin back
    and thats good.....plus she got back.....mmmmm....
    these feelins i have for her are real
    i wondah if she feels tha same....
    but yet we just met
    and tha game must be played...
    "i'll call u in a couple of days"
    thats whut i say...
    but to have her trippin'...
    i'll give it 'bout 2 weeks....
    and she'll be flippin'...
    so when she answers she plays it cool
    like she dont know me...
    "oh,L i forgot you was gonna call"
    yeah aight....shorty seemin kinda phony....
    but i'ma give her anotha chance
    take her out
    maybe we could dance
    maybe we could go 2 dinner
    2 lone sinners..
    tryin ta find out whut tha other is thinkin'...
    but after 3 hours of that i'm like "fugckit" lets go drinkin'....
    after a couple of glasses of wine she'll be mine...
    while tha whole time shorty is sayin to herself
    "this man had me with the first line".......



    aint it funny.......how sometimes both be trippin....
    this was a good piece beautiful.......
    much love mamita.....one.....