Black Poetry : He Get It From His Daddy

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  1. SuNNiOne

    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    His charm. His style. His beautiful smile.
    His wit. His walk. The way he talks.
    His character. His flows. The things that He knows.
    His laugh. His hands. His mahogany skin.
    His scent. His taste. His thug-tight ways.
    From the top of His head to the soles of His feet.
    And every **** thing that’s in between.
    He has this way of getting to me. Charming me.
    Emphatically!
    I’m sure this kinda **** just can’t be taught!
    So lemme share with you my thoughts.
    I think it’s inherent. One hundred percent genetic.
    He had to be, born wit it.
    In other words, He get it from his Daddy!
    Ask me how I know it’s true? Simple.
    It’s because his Moms is sprung too.
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    tight flow sunni

    excellent work!


    pd

    by the way, we're having our works published
    in an Anthology

    if you are interested, please post a reply
    expressing your interest

    we would like to have you

    peacenmanyblessings
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nuthin like branding your child for life...

    see dat...that's my SON.:)

    nice flow.
     
  4. SuNNiOne

    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Poets. For reading and responding.
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunni...

    I have read i think all your scribes and i gotta say...you have me rollin over here... These joint me tight to def. And i'm loving every single one.. I'll be looking for some more...

    Peace
     
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    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was sweet...
    i like the flow..
    Nice and on beat!
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    One

    feeling the love ONE

    um, where you writing from girl

    want to big up the spot


    DSSNY
     
  8. SuNNiOne

    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    It's lovely when people like what you do.
    And Mr Street Soja. I write from the heart.
    That's my answer to your question, even though
    I know you probably wanted to know where
    I live. :)
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo ONE

    i don't want to know your name
    don't want to meet your moms
    don't want to know your baby daddy
    and **** sure don't want your phone number
    i like your work, your subjects and

    ONE just wanted to know where you was bringing it from

    DSSNY

    Peace and Love
     
  10. SuNNiOne

    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    Well. ****. I had no idea that my reply indicated
    that I THOUGHT you wanted to know all of the things
    that were mentioned above. In any event. I now know
    all of the things that you DON'T want to know. You
    have made it completely clear. Crystal. Thanks!
     
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