Black Poetry : He Dont See Me....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He don’t see me
    For if he did
    He would find
    a heart of gold
    as it yearns to unfold
    before
    him…..
    and know the
    love is pure
    that flows
    from within it
    one who will
    always love him
    rain, sleet and snow….
    To hold
    Caress and adore him
    In my heart he is my king
    And I love him
    he don’t hear me
    as I call him thru the night
    as my dreams flow..
    my heart aches
    as my walls begin to close
    as I sit and watch
    from afar….
    Hopin he notice me….
    Inside my world
    wishin
    wantin
    just once he look my way….
    he don’t feel me
    for he would feel my
    pain within me
    as I cry myself to sleep
    yearning for his warmth….
    Just glance by chance….
    As his love
    …..my wings fold
    And the storms begin
    As the clouds become dark
    He don’t see me
    He don’t feel me
    He don’t hear me……… :crying:
    As I spoke in a hush….I love you..
    My love is yours…..come to me....
    where we can make a home....

    a blkangel thang...... :angel1:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] sis...like dat huh...
    strongly emotive piece...be well my sista :grouphug:
     
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    don't wait for him to notice, baby
    tell him how you feel
    whether by email, card or whatever
    let him know the deal
    waitin on others takes away your power
    you may never get a chance
    at least if you try
    you may still get to dance
    the risk of getting hurt is scary
    paralyzes with fear
    but the pain of never knowing
    is by far the greater hurt, my dear
    take the leap and speak
    have a little faith
    you'll never know if you don't try
    don't let the chance go to waste


    love ya girl ;)
     
  4. angelicsage

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    whoa...passion...strong

    if he ain't seeing or feeling...

    then he's blind on multiple levels...

    but he might wanna re-gain his sight

    because someone will see that heart of gold

    place love around it and take it home...

    feeling the emotion sister...
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sisters thankz fo da read...
    glad ya likes this write....:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaa!
    laying da p down tyte drop
    he better see u after dis
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well ya know how that goes.... but just a write
    much love to ya....glad ya likes....Angel
     
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    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love your work,
    Keep it coming!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel Eyes,

    He sees you

    Open up his nose

    Find out what he's like

    Curled up in the toes ~



    This is very special indeed, nice write!
     
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    Or maybe he thinks U don't see him.

    Let it be known.
     
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