Black Poetry : He Don't Know

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  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He don't know
    How his words touch me
    So deeply I can feel them
    On my skin
    With each syllable
    I pronounce
    As my eyes scan
    Over each sweet
    member of the
    Alphabet
    He don't know
    My heart longs
    For Him ever day
    To hear a word
    Or two of what
    He has to say
    He don't know
    My heart goes out
    To Him
    When He expresses
    His pain with
    The pen
    And causes me goosebumps
    When He talks about
    Making love
    He don't know
    Most of what i say
    Is directed to Him
    For His eyes
    And His approval
    For His love
    He don't know
    That I cherish
    Every word
    And He don't know
    That I love Him. :heart:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw girl, this is so pretty. Are you gonna tell him??
     
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    oooh i know the feeling girl, i know the feeling... nice flow...
     
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    HE BETTER WAKE UP. smile...
     
  5. true love

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    gempis...no, it's probably best that i don't. but thank you.

    poeticly...i'm glad you're feeling me. thanks so much

    Hodee...Yeah he truly needs to open his eyes!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If his eyes were open and he could see. But something was in his way. Maybe now isn't the time or place. Continue to keep him close as you can. If it's to be he will run the race. accept him as he is and that proves your love. Be patient it proves your worth. things change and they happen. They come if their faith.
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee...you are so right, and i will try to keep him as close as i possibly can. I definitely accept him as who he is. I love him as a friend more than anything else though, and if we're never more than friends that's cool with me. I don't wanna lose his friendship.
     
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    Thanks True. Youre a sweet lady. I hope he deserves a friend like you. Much Love...:heart: :heart: :love:
     
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    Flow with me TRUE Love...

    I know my love.
    May be calling you.
    If I tried I might consume you to fast.

    I like to take you.
    A little at a time.
    Savor your sweetness.
    Tasting your fine.

    Posing with you.
    Sending lines.
    Getting to know.
    Your the goodness of my delight.

    You know I know you hear me girl.
    Me rocking you.
    I want you so bad.
    Let you rock my world.

    It is something I dream of.
    Thinking of you.

    Were getting to know this love.
    Until I know I can come correct.
    With much respect.
    And Give you all of me.

    I wouldn't want to be there just cause you fire me up.

    That would mess up the crust of this beautiful love.

    If you don't mind.
    Let me take over.



    I'm savoring you.
    It's good for me.
    It soothes my mind.
    I hope i'm doing the thang for you too.

    I know you will let me know.

    Thinking of you.
    You know I told you I would.
    I know you are thinking of me.
    Don't ponder on.
    Distance is keeping us apart.

    I may be on the other side of the world.
    But love crosses the miles.

    In the dark.

    Can you feel it.

    I give.

    It's good.

    It's yours.


    When you sleep at night and dream.
    I know you see my heart.

    TRUE LOVE

    I know that power exist.
    Cause love is that strong.
    So I will be true.
    I will do no wrong.

    Your my special.

    Kissing you.

    If you need me hit me up.

    I'll be there for you.

    You know how to call my name.

    Love is mind anticipation.

    The physical is the prize.

    So if for some reason, tragic thought.
    Distance and time keep me out of your arms.
    Where ever you are.
    Whom ever your with.
    I know I have a place in your heart.

    Your success is my success.

    Your wins are mine too.

    You know I care about you.

    It's me.

    I'm unique.

    He does know
    How his words touch you
    crawling - all over you

    On your skin
    those goosebumps
    tells me your alive.
    Heart beating woman.
    Flashing desires.

    I will tell you.

    When it comes to love.
    I'm passionate.
    I know it flows naturally.

    I'm simple to please
    No extra effort.
    Just the love from thee.

    As you know from the feel.
    I love you now, then and forever.

    It's real. LOVE
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

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    dig that...lol nice flow both
     
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